图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because there isn't a convenient one near my hometown. However, I enjoy reading books online since it's very convenient."

範例: I don't often go to the library because there isn't a convenient one near my hometown. However, I enjoy reading books online since it's very convenient.

建議: Answer directly and use correct tense. Use linking words to clarify your points. For example, "When I visit a library, I usually read newly released books or rare books that are not available in bookshops."

範例: When I visit a library, I usually read newly released books or rare books that are not available in bookshops.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Be concise and avoid repetition. For example, "I used to visit the library when I was preparing for my A level exams because it was a quiet place to study. My friends and I enjoyed the calm environment, which helped us focus."

範例: I used to visit the library when I was preparing for my A level exams because it was a quiet place to study. My friends and I enjoyed the calm environment, which helped us focus.

建議: Avoid vague expressions and unsupported opinions. Answer directly and politely. For example, "I'm not sure about that because I don't have Chinese friends, but I believe many Chinese children visit libraries to gain knowledge."

範例: I'm not sure about that because I don't have Chinese friends, but I believe many Chinese children visit libraries to gain knowledge.

× There's no any convenient library in my hometown to visit me easily, so I really got there.

✓ There isn't any convenient library in my hometown that I can visit easily, so I rarely go there.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect; 'any' should be used with a negative verb like 'isn't' to express absence. Also, 'to visit me easily' is incorrect; it should be 'that I can visit easily' to clarify the subject and object. 'Really got there' is incorrect; 'rarely go there' fits the context better.

× But I like to read books on online because it's very convenient.

✓ But I like to read books online because it's very convenient.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'online'. 'Online' functions as an adverb here, so 'read books online' is correct.

× If I had a chance to visit a library, I would like to read some books which are newly released or some books that can't find in book shops which are very rare to find.

✓ If I had a chance to visit a library, I would like to read some newly released books or some books that can't be found in bookshops and are very rare.

The phrase 'can't find in book shops' lacks a subject and verb; it should be 'can't be found in bookshops'. Also, 'which are very rare to find' is awkward; 'and are very rare' is clearer. The conjunction 'or' is acceptable here.

× I used to visit library when I'm I'm ready to my A level exam because at that time I want quite place to study and I hang out with myself friends to there and we are enjoying that calm and quiet environment and we used it in very useful way to study.

✓ I used to visit the library when I was preparing for my A level exam because at that time I wanted a quiet place to study. I hung out with my friends there, and we enjoyed that calm and quiet environment and used it in a very useful way to study.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'I'm I'm ready' should be 'I was preparing'; 'I want' should be 'I wanted'; 'I hang out' should be 'I hung out'; 'we are enjoying' should be 'we enjoyed'; 'myself friends' is incorrect, should be 'my friends'; 'to there' is incorrect, should be 'there'. Also, 'visit library' needs the definite article 'the library'.

× Honestly I'm on the fence about that because I have no any connection with Chinese friends to get that, but I think they would easily visit the library and get knowledge from there because they are very intelligent children in that country.

✓ Honestly, I'm on the fence about that because I have no connection with Chinese friends to know, but I think they would easily visit the library and gain knowledge from there because they are very intelligent children in that country.

The phrase 'no any connection' is incorrect; it should be 'no connection'. Also, 'to get that' is unclear; 'to know' fits better. 'Get knowledge' is better expressed as 'gain knowledge'.