图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases like 'unfortunately' and 'used to' multiple times. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better.

範例: I don't go to the library as often as I did when I was a child. Back then, I used to read many stories and literature there. Nowadays, I prefer using my phone during my free time.

建議: Your answer is understandable but repetitive with 'used to' and lacks linking words. Try to vary your vocabulary and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what you enjoyed about these activities.

範例: When I visited the library, I often read fiction, mystery, and crime stories. Additionally, I enjoyed spending time there with my friends, which made the experience more enjoyable.

建議: Good answer with personal details, but some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to correct grammar and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I went to the library much more often as a child. I enjoyed reading crime and mystery books designed for children. Moreover, I often went with my father, and we enjoyed reading together, which created lasting memories.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating 'I think' multiple times.

範例: Nowadays, Chinese kids don't visit libraries as often as before. Instead, they prefer reading on tablets, listening to audiobooks, or watching videos on platforms like YouTube.

× I used to go a lot to libraries and I used to read a lot of literature and stories.

✓ I used to go to libraries a lot and I used to read a lot of literature and stories.

The phrase 'go a lot to libraries' has incorrect preposition placement. The correct form is 'go to libraries a lot' because the preposition 'to' should directly follow the verb 'go' and the adverb 'a lot' should come after the object 'libraries'. This improves sentence clarity and naturalness.

× I also used to hang out with my friends that I went to library with.

✓ I also used to hang out with my friends whom I went to the library with.

The phrase 'friends that I went to library with' is incorrect because 'that' should be replaced with 'whom' when referring to people in this context, and the definite article 'the' is missing before 'library'. Also, ending a sentence with a preposition is acceptable in informal speech, but here adding 'with' at the end is fine. The correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I used to read a lot of crime and mystery books that they were of course specified for children.

✓ I used to read a lot of crime and mystery books that were, of course, specified for children.

The phrase 'books that they were of course specified' is incorrect because the pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. The relative clause should be 'books that were specified'. Also, commas are needed around 'of course' as it is an interrupter. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I was going with my my father who we enjoyed to read together and I still remember these memories.

✓ I used to go with my father, with whom I enjoyed reading together, and I still remember these memories.

The phrase 'who we enjoyed to read together' is incorrect. The relative pronoun 'who' should be 'whom' because it is the object of the preposition 'with'. Also, 'enjoyed to read' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading'. Additionally, 'was going' is less appropriate here; 'used to go' fits better to express habitual past action. The correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I think nowadays kids unfortunately don't go as much as how much kids used to go in the past.

✓ I think nowadays kids unfortunately don't go as much as kids used to go in the past.

The phrase 'as much as how much kids used to go' is redundant and incorrect. The correct comparative structure is 'as much as kids used to go'. Removing 'how much' eliminates redundancy and improves sentence clarity.