图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，建议简化表达并避免重复。可以直接说明自己不常去图书馆，而更喜欢和孩子一起去书店阅读。

範例: I don't often go to the library, but I usually visit bookstores with my children where we can read books that interest us.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答主要活动，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

範例: I usually borrow books from the library, but I rarely go there because I prefer reading at bookstores.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议减少“uh”“umm”等词，使用正确时态，并简洁表达。

範例: Yes, I went to the library in middle school and college to find information from books.

建議: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多。建议使用正确的时态和句式，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I think fewer Chinese kids go to the library nowadays because the Internet provides a wide variety of information, but reading books is still important.

× Not really, but I'll often go to the bookstores which we can read the books we are interested in with my children.

✓ Not really, but I often go to the bookstores where we can read the books we are interested in with my children.

这里的“I'll often go”使用了将来时的情态动词“will”，但句子表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“I often go”。另外，关系代词“which”用于指代地点不合适，应使用“where”。

× I will borrow some books from the library, but uh, I really rare to go to the library.

✓ I borrow some books from the library, but uh, I really rarely go to the library.

“I will borrow”表示将来时，但这里描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“I borrow”。“I really rare to go”中“rare”是形容词，应该用副词“rarely”修饰动词“go”。

× I really rare to go to the library.

✓ I really rarely go to the library.

“rare”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词“go”，应使用副词“rarely”。

× Yes, uh, in my middle school and the colleges, they all have the library.

✓ Yes, uh, in my middle school and college, they all have libraries.

“the colleges”应改为复数“college”或“colleges”，且“the library”应改为复数“libraries”，因为多个学校各有自己的图书馆。

× So when I in the school I will go to the library to umm get some information from the books.

✓ So when I am in school, I go to the library to get some information from the books.

缺少动词“am”，导致句子结构错误。将“will go”改为一般现在时“go”，因为描述的是过去习惯。

× I think nowadays they were less and less to go to the library, because the Internet can provide lots of information, different varieties of information, what they need, but we also still need to read.

✓ I think nowadays they go to the library less and less, because the Internet can provide lots of information, different varieties of information they need, but we still need to read.

“they were less and less to go”时态错误，应使用一般现在时“they go less and less”。“less and less to go”结构不正确，应改为“go less and less”。