图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中有较多的语气词“umm”和“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少语气词的使用，句子结构应更自然，避免语法错误，如“looking”应改为“look”。

範例: Yes, I often go to the school library to read novels or look for reference materials.

建議: 回答较为完整且连贯，但“the study or work”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达，如“studying or working”。

範例: I usually prepare for my exams or quizzes in the library because it's a quiet place that helps me focus on studying or working.

建議: 回答中语气词过多，句子结构不够连贯。建议减少语气词，使用更自然的时态和表达方式，避免重复“when I was a kid”。

範例: Not really. When I was a child, I preferred going to bookstores to buy books because I loved reading.

建議: 回答中语气词“umm”影响流畅，且“more and more”重复使用显得冗余。建议简化表达，使用更准确的词汇，如“increasingly heavy pressure”。

範例: Yes, especially nowadays, more Chinese kids go to the library to study because they face increasingly heavy pressure due to competition.

× I often go to the library in our school to, umm, either read some novel books or uh, looking for the references.

✓ I often go to the library in our school to, umm, either read some novel books or uh, look for the references.

在“either...or...”结构中，两个动词形式应保持一致。这里“read”是动词原形，后面应使用“look”而不是“looking”。

× Instead of going to the library when I was a kid, umm. I prefer to go to some bookstores to buy some books because I really love reading books when I was a kid, umm.

✓ Instead of going to the library when I was a kid, umm, I preferred to go to some bookstores to buy some books because I really loved reading books when I was a kid, umm.

描述过去的习惯或动作时，动词应使用过去时态。这里“prefer”和“love”应改为“preferred”和“loved”。

× I usually prepare for my exams or the quizzes in the library because I think it's a quiet place that can help me focus on the study or work.

✓ I usually prepare for my exams or quizzes in the library because I think it's a quiet place that can help me focus on studying or working.

“focus on”后应接动名词形式，故“study”应改为“studying”，“work”应改为“working”。

× more and more Chinese kids often go to the library to study because the pressure they have to face is more and more heavy because of the, umm, competition between them.

✓ more and more Chinese kids often go to the library to study because the pressure they have to face is heavier and heavier because of the, umm, competition between them.

“more and more heavy”应改为比较级形式“heavier and heavier”，表示压力越来越大。