图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read books on my eBook. This way, I can read anywhere I want.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih teratur dengan menggunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

範例: I usually read books and do my homework in the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus.

建議: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan. Gunakan bentuk waktu yang tepat dan susun kalimat dengan lebih jelas agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami.

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, I went to the library because I loved reading comics and it was hard to get books at home.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

範例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I have seen many of them studying there instead of playing games.

× No, I don't, because I usually read the book with my ebook and I can read the book everywhere.

✓ No, I don't, because I usually read books on my ebook and I can read them everywhere.

The phrase 'read the book with my ebook' is awkward and incorrect. 'Read books on my ebook' is more natural and correct. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to match the general statement. 'Them' replaces 'the book' to avoid repetition.

× Read the book and do some homework. That is I usually do in the library and also I when I want to find a quiet place and then I will go in the library.

✓ I usually read books and do some homework in the library. Also, when I want to find a quiet place, I go to the library.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'I usually' clarifies the subject. 'Go in the library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, when I was a kid, I go to library because I love to read comic when I was a child and then I'm not easy to reach the book, so I go to, I went to the library.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I went to the library because I loved to read comics when I was a child and it was not easy to get books, so I went to the library.

The verbs 'go' and 'love' should be in the past tense 'went' and 'loved' to match the past time frame. 'Comic' should be plural 'comics'. 'I'm not easy to reach the book' is incorrect; it should be 'it was not easy to get books'. The sentence is corrected for tense consistency and clarity.

× I think Chinese get often go to the library because I see so many Chinese kids that always study in their childhood. Yes so they are not playing game but they always go to the library.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I see many Chinese kids who always study during their childhood. Yes, so they are not playing games but they always go to the library.

'Get often go' is incorrect; it should be 'often go'. 'So many' is acceptable but 'many' fits better here. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Playing game' should be plural 'playing games'. The sentence is corrected for quantifier use and proper relative pronouns.