图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，如“search even anything”应为“search for anything”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更地道的表达。

範例: I used to go to the library often when I was in high school, but now I rarely go because I can find information easily on my computer or smartphone.

建議: 回答中时态混用且表达不够清晰，如“maybe I like to do some research”不符合语境。建议使用正确时态，明确表达目的，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: When I was in high school, I usually went to the library to do my homework and to research for other subjects.

建議: 存在语法错误，如“did not went”应为“did not go”，“preferred to hung”应为“preferred to hang”。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的动词形式，并使句子更简洁自然。

範例: I did not go to the library often when I was a child because I preferred to hang out and play sports.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“a lot of child”应为“a lot of children”，“reading for reading books”表达重复且不自然。建议使用正确的名词复数形式，避免重复，表达更准确。

範例: Yes, reading is very popular in China. Last week, I visited a library and saw many children under 10 reading books, which I found very impressive.

× Actually, I went to the library very frequently when I was a high school student, but nowadays I am not willing to go to the library because I can search even anything on my computer or my smartphone.

✓ Actually, I went to the library very frequently when I was a high school student, but nowadays I am not willing to go to the library because I can search for anything on my computer or my smartphone.

句中“search even anything”用法不正确，正确表达应为“search for anything”，动词search后需加介词for。

× Well, in my high school I often went to the library for my homework or maybe I like to do some research for the other subjects.

✓ Well, in my high school I often went to the library for my homework or maybe I liked to do some research for the other subjects.

句中“maybe I like to do”时态不一致，前文为过去时，后文应保持过去时，故改为“maybe I liked to do”。

× Well, I did not went to the library very frequently when I was a child because when I was very young I preferred to hung outside and play some sports.

✓ Well, I did not go to the library very frequently when I was a child because when I was very young I preferred to hang outside and play some sports.

“did not went”错误，助动词did后应接动词原形“go”；“preferred to hung”中“hung”应为动词原形“hang”。

× Yes, I think reading is very popular in China. Last week I went to the library and saw a lot of child under 10 in the library and reading for reading books and I think they are very impressive.

✓ Yes, I think reading is very popular in China. Last week I went to the library and saw a lot of children under 10 in the library reading books and I think they are very impressive.

“a lot of child”中“child”应为复数形式“children”；“reading for reading books”表达不自然，改为“reading books”。