图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ звучит немного неестественно и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегая повторов и излишних слов. Также ответ должен быть более структурированным и логичным.

範例: I don't often go to the library because I usually find the information I need on the Internet, which is more convenient for me.

建議: Ответ содержит повторы и ошибки, а также звучит неестественно. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторов. Также уточните, что именно вы делаете в библиотеке.

範例: When I visit the library with my friends, we usually discuss stories from books and enjoy reading together, which is quite fun for us.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Постарайтесь использовать правильные времена и более ясные предложения. Также избегайте повторов и уточните детали.

範例: When I was a child, I lived in a village without a library, so I didn't visit one. However, my mother bought me many books, and I enjoyed reading them at home.

建議: Ответ слишком общий и немного неестественный. Добавьте больше конкретики и используйте связующие слова для улучшения связности.

範例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because they enjoy reading and discussing books with their friends and family.

× So honestly, I never go to the library because for me it's unusual because nowadays we have a lot of information in our Internet and instead of library.

✓ So honestly, I never go to the library because for me it's unusual since nowadays we have a lot of information on the Internet instead of the library.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'Internet'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'instead of library' lacks the article 'the' before 'library'. Using 'since' is more appropriate than repeating 'because'.

× I can say that when I go to the library with my friends, we often discuss a story on books.

✓ I can say that when I go to the library with my friends, we often discuss stories in books.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to content inside books. Also, 'a story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context.

× Also, we read read books and it's funny for our for us.

✓ Also, we read books and it's fun for us.

The phrase 'funny for our for us' is incorrect. 'Funny' means causing laughter, but the intended meaning is likely 'fun'. Also, 'for our' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'for us'.

× So in my childhood we lived in village and there we haven't got a library.

✓ So in my childhood we lived in a village and there we didn't have a library.

The noun 'village' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'haven't got' is present perfect, which is inappropriate for past context; 'didn't have' is correct.

× That's why I didn't go to the library so.

✓ That's why I didn't go to the library.

The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× But my mom bought me a lot of books and I wrote them in my childhood when I was a child.

✓ But my mom bought me a lot of books and I read them in my childhood when I was a child.

The verb 'wrote' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'read' to indicate the action of looking at and understanding books.

× Actually, I can say yes because there are a lot of children and adults who love reading and discuss a lot of books.

✓ Actually, I can say yes because there are a lot of children and adults who love reading and discussing a lot of books.

The verbs 'love reading and discuss' should be parallel in form; 'discussing' is the correct gerund form to match 'reading'.