图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，明确说明去图书馆的原因，并避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library after class because I need a quiet place to study and review what I have learned.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议用完整句子表达你在图书馆做什么，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I usually study my academic subjects in the library, and sometimes I review and practice English to improve my skills.

建議: 时态使用不正确，句子结构混乱。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I often went to the library to find interesting books to read, but now I usually study in the library's lab and have less time for reading.

建議: 句子不完整且表达不自然。建议用完整句子说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because the government encourages them to study hard, so they need a quiet place like the library to focus on their studies.

× Yes, I often go to the library because after class I need to spend time on. Obtaining the knowledge so that I can reveal it or repeat it together better.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because after class I need to spend time obtaining knowledge so that I can review it or repeat it better.

原句中“spend time on.”后面断句不完整，且“Obtaining”不应大写且应与前句连贯，导致句子结构混乱。应将两句合并，去掉多余的句号，使句子完整通顺。

× Yes, I often go to the library because after class I need to spend time on. Obtaining the knowledge so that I can reveal it or repeat it together better.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because after class I need to spend time obtaining knowledge so that I can review it or repeat it better.

原句中使用了“reveal it”，应为“review it”，因为“review”表示复习，符合语境；“together better”表达不清，应去掉“together”或改为“better”。

× I usually refill my academic. Subject in the library and sometimes to overcome my English problems I needed to review and repeat it in the library.

✓ I usually review my academic subjects in the library, and sometimes to overcome my English problems I need to review and repeat them in the library.

“refill my academic. Subject”表达错误，应为“review my academic subjects”；“Subject”不应大写且应为复数；“needed”时态错误，应为现在时“need”；“it”指代不明，应为复数“them”。

× Yes I do, because when I were kid I often go to library to find some interesting books to read, but now I just study at the lab in the library but not have time to read the book.

✓ Yes, I did, because when I was a kid I often went to the library to find some interesting books to read, but now I just study at the lab in the library and do not have time to read books.

“I do”应为过去时“did”；“when I were kid”应为“when I was a kid”；“go”应为过去时“went”；“to library”前应加定冠词“the”；“but not have time”应为“and do not have time”；“read the book”应为复数“read books”。

× Yes, because our Chinese government. Have the policy to let our kids to study a lot so our kids need to go to the library for study.

✓ Yes, because our Chinese government has the policy to let our kids study a lot, so our kids need to go to the library to study.

“government. Have”断句错误，应合并为“government has”；“let our kids to study”中“to”多余，应去掉；“for study”应改为“to study”以符合习惯用法。