图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library when I have exams because it has many past papers that help me prepare effectively.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子冗长且缺乏连贯性。建议使用简洁的句子，注意动词形式和连接词的使用，使表达更连贯。

範例: In the library, I usually study using past papers. I also enjoy reading books and sometimes watching movies there because it helps me relax.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确的过去时态，简洁表达，并且注意句子连贯性。

範例: Yes, when I was a child, my mother often took me to the library to help me complete my holiday homework by reading books and watching educational movies.

建議: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达观点时要逻辑清晰。

範例: No, I think fewer Chinese children go to the library nowadays because they prefer using their mobile phones and reading e-books instead.

× Yes, when I have exam I always go to the library to study my exam because the library has many DSC past paper to let me look and use to study by exam.

✓ Yes, when I have an exam I always go to the library to study for my exam because the library has many DSC past papers for me to look at and use to study for the exam.

“exam” 应该用单数形式时加冠词“an”，表示“一次考试”；“past paper” 应该用复数形式“past papers”，因为有很多试卷；“to let me look and use to study by exam” 结构不正确，改为“for me to look at and use to study for the exam”更符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, when I have exam I always go to the library to study my exam because the library has many DSC past paper to let me look and use to study by exam.

✓ Yes, when I have an exam I always go to the library to study for my exam because the library has many DSC past papers for me to look at and use to study for the exam.

“study my exam” 应该用“study for my exam”，表示“为考试学习”；“look” 后面需要介词“at”，即“look at”；“study by exam” 不合适，应该是“study for the exam”。

× Besides I talking about in the library, I will use the DSC pass paper to study and also I'm like to reading the book and watching the movie.

✓ Besides talking in the library, I will use the DSC past papers to study and also I like reading books and watching movies.

“I talking about in the library” 结构错误，应改为“talking in the library”；“I'm like to reading” 应改为“I like reading”，去掉“am”；“the book”和“the movie”应改为复数形式“books”和“movies”，表示泛指。

× Besides I talking about in the library, I will use the DSC pass paper to study and also I'm like to reading the book and watching the movie.

✓ Besides talking in the library, I will use the DSC past papers to study and also I like reading books and watching movies.

“Besides I talking” 中“talking” 应用动名词形式，且前面不需要“I”，应为“Besides talking”；“like to reading” 结构错误，应该是“like reading”，动词“like”后接动名词。

× Besides I talking about in the library, I will use the DSC pass paper to study and also I'm like to reading the book and watching the movie.

✓ Besides talking in the library, I will use the DSC past papers to study and also I like reading books and watching movies.

“DSC pass paper” 应为复数“DSC past papers”，表示多份试卷；“the book”和“the movie”应改为复数“books”和“movies”，表示泛指。

× Watching the movie in the library because it can make me more relaxed and I feel very interesting.

✓ I watch movies in the library because it helps me relax and I find it very interesting.

“Watching the movie in the library because...” 句子缺主语，应改为“I watch movies in the library because...”；“make me more relaxed” 更自然表达为“helps me relax”；“I feel very interesting” 错误，应该是“I find it very interesting”，因为“interesting”是形容事物的，不能用“feel”来形容自己。

× Yes, when I were a young person, my mother always take with me to go to the library because I have the holiday homework, need to watching the movie and reading the book and to complete the homework.

✓ Yes, when I was a young person, my mother always took me to the library because I had holiday homework and needed to watch movies and read books to complete the homework.

“were” 应改为“was”，因为主语是单数第一人称；“take with me” 应改为“took me”，过去时态且不需要“with”；“have” 应改为过去时“had”；“need to watching” 应改为“needed to watch”，动词形式错误。

× Yes, when I were a young person, my mother always take with me to go to the library because I have the holiday homework, need to watching the movie and reading the book and to complete the homework.

✓ Yes, when I was a young person, my mother always took me to the library because I had holiday homework and needed to watch movies and read books to complete the homework.

“take with me to go to the library” 结构不正确，应为“took me to the library”，不需要“with”；“need to watching” 应为“needed to watch”，动词不定式形式。

× Yes, when I were a young person, my mother always take with me to go to the library because I have the holiday homework, need to watching the movie and reading the book and to complete the homework.

✓ Yes, when I was a young person, my mother always took me to the library because I had holiday homework and needed to watch movies and read books to complete the homework.

“the holiday homework” 中“homework”是不可数名词，不用加冠词“the”；“watching the movie”和“reading the book”应改为复数形式“watch movies”和“read books”，表示泛指。

× No, in past I think many people or children will was go to the library.

✓ No, in the past I think many people or children would go to the library.

“in past” 应为“in the past”，需要定冠词；“will was go” 结构错误，应改为“would go”，表示过去的习惯或推测。

× No, in past I think many people or children will was go to the library.

✓ No, in the past I think many people or children would go to the library.

“in past” 缺少定冠词，应为“in the past”；“go to the library” 结构正确。

× But in fact many people and many children were kids like to watching their mobile and reading the ebooks, so reducing to go to the library.

✓ But in fact many people and children liked watching their mobiles and reading ebooks, so they reduced going to the library.

“were kids like to watching” 结构错误，应改为“liked watching”；“mobile” 应用复数“mobiles”；“reducing to go” 不正确，应改为“reduced going”，动词形式和搭配错误。

× But in fact many people and many children were kids like to watching their mobile and reading the ebooks, so reducing to go to the library.

✓ But in fact many people and children liked watching their mobiles and reading ebooks, so they reduced going to the library.

“like to watching” 应改为“liked watching”，动词形式错误；“reducing to go” 应改为“reduced going”，动词搭配错误。