图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons why you go to the library now compared to your childhood.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library now. When I was a child, I didn't know much about libraries, so I rarely visited them. However, nowadays I go every day because I find the library a quiet and comfortable place to study.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains contradictions. You said the library is noisy but also no noise pollution. Please clarify your ideas and use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, avoid repeating the same points.

範例: I usually go to the library to study and relax. When I feel stressed, I find the quiet environment of the library helps me calm down and focus better on my work.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Please give a direct response first, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences and improve grammar.

範例: No, I did not go to the library much when I was a child because I was not familiar with it. But now, I visit the library regularly to study and find useful books.

建議: Your answer has some good points but needs better structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, be more specific about the reasons.

範例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library. Firstly, they visit the library to study, especially during festivals. Secondly, when they feel stressed, they go there to find peace and calm their minds.

× Yes, I often go to the library but when I was child I was founding difficult to search library because at the time I didn't know about library.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library but when I was a child I found it difficult to search the library because at that time I didn't know about the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was founding' instead of the past tense 'found'. Also, 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. 'Search library' should be 'search the library' to specify the place. Use 'at that time' instead of 'at the time' for clarity.

× Yes, I often go to the library but when I was child I was founding difficult to search library because at the time I didn't know about library.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library but when I was a child I found it difficult to search the library because at that time I didn't know about the library.

The noun 'child' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, 'library' as a specific place needs the definite article 'the' before it. Articles are important to specify nouns correctly.

× But now I go to the library everyday because of my studying purpose because I think library is a relaxable place to study.

✓ But now I go to the library every day for my study purposes because I think the library is a relaxing place to study.

The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal; the correct adverb is 'every day'. 'Studying purpose' should be 'study purposes' for natural expression. 'Relaxable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'relaxing'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Well, I go to library for many reasons.

✓ Well, I go to the library for many reasons.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, the preposition 'to' is correctly used here.

× First of all, when I feel stress and unsatisfied in any situation, I go to library because I think library is a a noisy place and there is no pollution about noise and that's why I go to library and sometimes study purpose.

✓ First of all, when I feel stressed and unsatisfied in any situation, I go to the library because I think the library is a quiet place and there is no noise pollution, and that's why I go to the library sometimes for study purposes.

'Feel stress' should be 'feel stressed' to use the adjective form. 'Unsatisfied' is correct but 'dissatisfied' might be better. 'A noisy place' contradicts the intended meaning; 'quiet place' fits better. 'Pollution about noise' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'noise pollution'. 'Go to library' needs 'the'. 'Sometimes study purpose' should be 'sometimes for study purposes'.

× Well, I mentioned in my earlier answer that when I was child I didn't know as much as about library.

✓ Well, I mentioned in my earlier answer that when I was a child I didn't know much about the library.

'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'Didn't know as much as about library' is awkward; 'didn't know much about the library' is correct. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× That's why I wouldn't go there in my childhood age.

✓ That's why I didn't go there during my childhood.

'Wouldn't go' implies conditional or habitual past; here simple past 'didn't go' is appropriate. 'In my childhood age' is unnatural; 'during my childhood' is correct.

× But recently I have. I go to library for several reason. First of all, they study and.

✓ But recently I have. I go to the library for several reasons. First of all, they study there.

'I go to library' needs 'the'. 'Several reason' should be plural 'several reasons'. The sentence 'First of all, they study and.' is incomplete; it should be completed or rephrased. Here, 'they study there' is a possible correction.

× I go to library for several reason.

✓ I go to the library for several reasons.

'Reason' should be plural 'reasons' to match 'several'. Also, 'go to library' needs 'the'.

× As a result, they calm his, calm their mind.

✓ As a result, they calm their minds.

'They calm his' mixes plural subject 'they' with singular possessive 'his'. It should be 'their' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to match 'they'.