图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizda gaplar biroz chalkash va takrorlanmoqda. Ingliz tilida aniq va qisqa gapirishga harakat qiling. Masalan, sababni aniqroq va tabiiyroq ifoda eting.

範例: I often go to the library to prepare for my university application and to practice for the IELTS exam.

建議: Javobingiz yaxshi, lekin gaplarni bog'lash uchun ko'proq bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va takrorlarni kamaytiring.

範例: I usually do my homework in the library. Additionally, I talk with my friends and once or twice a week, we have debates with other groups to improve our English proficiency.

建議: Savolga to'liq javob bering. Agar tushunmasangiz, iltimos, savolni qayta so'rang yoki qisqacha javob bering.

範例: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because it was far from my home.

建議: Javobingizda takrorlar va noaniqliklar bor. Gaplarni aniqroq va tabiiyroq qilib ifoda eting, takrorlardan qoching.

範例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library to improve their skills and prepare for competitions like the Olympiad.

× I usually go to the library because I should apply for the university and that's why it's essential to go to the library and to practice more to get an aisles certificate.

✓ I usually go to the library because I have to apply for the university, and that's why it's essential to go to the library and practice more to get an IELTS certificate.

The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly used here to express obligation. 'Have to' is more appropriate to indicate necessity or obligation. Also, 'aisles' is a misspelling of 'IELTS', which is the correct certificate name.

× I usually do my homework. Also I I speak with my friends, we have a conversation there and and once or twice a week we debate with other group of people.

✓ I usually do my homework. Also, I speak with my friends; we have conversations there, and once or twice a week we debate with other groups of people.

The phrase 'other group of people' should be pluralized to 'other groups of people' to match the plural context. Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to indicate multiple instances.

× It will improve our proficiency in English.

✓ It improves our proficiency in English.

Since the student is talking about a habitual action, the present simple tense 'improves' is more appropriate than the future tense 'will improve'.

× I think yes, because when I watched a movie about Chinese, they usually usually go to the library for improving their skills and additionally, uh, to win the Olympiad to improve.

✓ I think yes, because when I watched a movie about Chinese people, they usually go to the library to improve their skills and, additionally, to win the Olympiad.

The phrase 'to win the Olympiad to improve' is unclear and redundant. 'To improve' after 'win the Olympiad' is unnecessary. Also, 'Chinese' should be 'Chinese people' for clarity. The repeated 'usually' is a redundancy and should be removed.