图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I don't offering' và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. The closest library is in the city center, which is quite far and inconvenient for me to visit.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như 'borrowed uh, both' và '5 many books'. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually borrow several books to help me prepare for my homework and study.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ một cách chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì 'I don't like books a lot', bạn nên nói 'I didn't like books much'. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't like reading books. I preferred watching TV instead.

建議: Bạn nên tránh trả lời vòng vo và sử dụng câu hỏi lại với người phỏng vấn. Thay vào đó, hãy đưa ra ý kiến hoặc dự đoán của bạn một cách tự tin và sử dụng cấu trúc câu phù hợp.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly to study and read books.

× No, I don't offering to go the library because there isn't a library in my area.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because there isn't a library in my area.

The verb 'offering' is incorrectly used after 'don't'. After 'do not', the base form of the verb should be used. The correct verb is 'go', not 'offering'.

× No, I don't offering to go the library because there isn't a library in my area.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because there isn't a library in my area.

The phrase 'go the library' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go to the library'.

× because there isn't a library in my area.

✓ because there isn't a library in my area.

This sentence is correct in structure; no correction needed here.

× That's the one in my city, but it is quite far from where I live so it's not very convenient for me to visit it.

✓ That's the one in my city, but it is quite far from where I live, so it's not very convenient for me to visit.

The pronoun 'it' at the end is redundant because 'visit' can be used transitively with 'the library' implied. Removing 'it' makes the sentence more natural.

× When I go to the library I use 5 many books to prepare my homework.

✓ When I go to the library, I use many books to prepare my homework.

The phrase '5 many books' is incorrect. 'Many' is used for countable nouns without a number. If specifying a number, use 'five books'. Here, 'many books' is appropriate.

× MMM, I think it's a borrowed uh, both.

✓ MMM, I think I borrow both.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It's a borrowed uh, both' does not make sense. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× No, I didn't because when I was a kid, I don't like books a lot.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid, I didn't like books a lot.

The verb tense should be consistent in the past. 'Don't like' is present tense; it should be 'didn't like' to match 'when I was a kid'.

× I like watch TV, so I didn't go to the library.

✓ I liked watching TV, so I didn't go to the library.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past context. Also, 'watch' should be in gerund form 'watching' after 'liked'.

× I am a Vietnamese, so I don't know.

✓ I am Vietnamese, so I don't know.

The article 'a' is not used before nationalities when used as adjectives. 'Vietnamese' here is an adjective, so 'a' should be removed.

× Chinese kids often go to the library, isn't it?

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library, don't they?

The question tag for 'Chinese kids often go' should be 'don't they?' not 'isn't it?'. The subject and auxiliary verb must agree in question tags.