图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answers more natural and grammatically correct by using proper prepositions and verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea multiple times. For example, instead of saying "I often go to library when I get some information about my topic, my assignment" and then "I also prefer to all go to library and collect information," you can combine these ideas more smoothly.

範例: I often go to the library to find information for my assignments. I enjoy gathering information from both books and the Internet there.

建議: Focus on using correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same phrases. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary instead of vague words like "delightness." Adding linking words will improve coherence.

範例: Usually, I read interesting novels in the library, such as those by Umairah Ahmed, including Amarillo and Abhaya. I really enjoy these books because they are full of love and joy.

建議: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Avoid unclear phrases like "always leave" and "prefer to all go." Try to be more specific and concise.

範例: Yes, I often went to the library with my father when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading English poems because they were very interesting. Sometimes, I also went with my relatives.

建議: Avoid repeating the same information and improve grammar by using correct verb tenses and plural forms. Also, try to answer the question directly and provide relevant details or opinions.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but when I was a child, I often went to the library to read poems like "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star." I think many children enjoy reading poems there.

× Well, I often go to library when I get some information about my topic, my assignment.

✓ Well, I often go to the library when I get some information about my topic, my assignment.

In English, 'library' is a countable noun and usually requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place like 'the library'. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× So I really enjoy to collect information from books and Internet.

✓ So I really enjoy collecting information from books and the Internet.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive ('to collect'). Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× And I also prefer to all go to library and collect information.

✓ And I also prefer to all go to the library and collect information.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Then usually I read interesting novels such as Peter Kamil and Amarillo and Abhaya from Umairah Ahmed.

✓ Usually, I read interesting novels such as Peter Kamil, Amarillo, and Abhaya by Umairah Ahmed.

The phrase 'from Umairah Ahmed' is incorrect; 'by' is used to indicate the author of books. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list.

× So I really enjoyed to read those books.

✓ So I really enjoyed reading those books.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive ('to read').

× Those are full of love and delightness and I really enjoyed.

✓ Those are full of love and delight, and I really enjoyed them.

'Delightness' is not a correct noun; 'delight' is appropriate. Also, the sentence needs a pronoun 'them' to refer back to the books.

× Yes, always leave when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I always went when I was a kid.

'Leave' is present tense and incorrect here; past tense 'went' is needed to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, the sentence structure was incomplete without a subject.

× I go to library with my father and I really enjoy to read poems, English poems which are very interested and I really enjoy to read those poems and I also prefer to all go to library with your father's and relatives and.

✓ I went to the library with my father, and I really enjoyed reading English poems which are very interesting. I also prefer to go to the library with my father and relatives.

'Library' needs 'the'. 'Go' and 'enjoy' should be in past tense to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Interested' is incorrect; 'interesting' describes the poems. 'Your father's' is incorrect; it should be 'my father'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring.

× I also prefer to all go to library with your father's and relatives and.

✓ I also prefer to all go to the library with my father and relatives.

'Your father's' is incorrect in this context; the speaker should use 'my father'. Also, 'library' needs 'the'.

× Well, I don't know too much about Chinese kid, but when I was a kid I go to library and read interested poems such as Twinkle Twinkle Little Star and I also prefer to all go to library and read interesting poems.

✓ Well, I don't know too much about Chinese kids, but when I was a kid I went to the library and read interesting poems such as Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. I also prefer to go to the library and read interesting poems.

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' when speaking generally. 'Go' should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Library' needs 'the'. 'Interested' is incorrect; 'interesting' is the correct adjective to describe poems. The sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.