图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use clearer vocabulary. For example, instead of 'sending some facts or some documents to the authority,' say 'sending documents to officials.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to use the computers and print documents, especially when I need to send official papers. It provides convenient facilities that I can't easily access at home.

建議: Focus on speaking clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh.' Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, clarify unclear phrases such as 'make some identities up to date.'

範例: Usually, I borrow books from the public library since I have a free membership card. Additionally, I use the library's computers to send important documents and update my personal information when needed.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve fluency by practicing smoother sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your experiences.

範例: Yes, when I was in school, I often went to the library to borrow books. Also, during breaks, my classmates and I would read newspapers there to stay informed.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases like 'free of course' and improve sentence coherence by using linking words. Be more concise and specific about why the library is helpful for kids.

範例: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries because they can borrow books for free for a limited time. Moreover, libraries provide useful practice materials that support their learning.

× I usually go to library to take the facilities.

✓ I usually go to the library to use the facilities.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'take the facilities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'use the facilities' to indicate utilizing services or amenities.

× I usually, uh, go to, uh, issue some books from there as I have ID card from Public Library, It's a free of cost and usually go to send some text or important documents And, uh, whenever I have to make some identities, uh, up to date it, I usually go to, uh, library.

✓ I usually go to the library to issue some books since I have an ID card from the Public Library. It's free of cost. I also usually go there to send some texts or important documents. Whenever I have to update some identities, I usually go to the library.

The original sentence is a run-on with multiple ideas improperly connected. It lacks proper punctuation and articles. Breaking it into clear sentences improves clarity. 'ID card' needs the article 'an'. 'Make some identities up to date' is awkward; 'update some identities' is clearer. Also, 'go to send some text' is better as 'go there to send some texts'.

× Yes, I remember that time when I was studying in a school, I was used to go to library to issue some books and whenever we have when, whenever we had a break, we go to the library and uh, usually read newspaper there.

✓ Yes, I remember that time when I was studying in school. I used to go to the library to issue some books, and whenever we had a break, we went to the library and usually read newspapers there.

The phrase 'was used to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'used to go' to indicate past habitual action. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the'. The tense should be consistent in past: 'we had a break' and 'we went to the library'. 'Read newspaper' should be plural 'read newspapers' to indicate general activity.

× Yes, the Chinese kids go to the library frequently because they can get free books from there and for of course it is for particular time, they can borrow books from there free of course, and they have to return after reading those books and also they can get some practice material from there that is really helpful.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library frequently because they can get free books from there. Of course, they can borrow books for a particular time free of charge, and they have to return them after reading. They can also get some practice material from there, which is really helpful.

The phrase 'for of course it is for particular time' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'for a particular time'. 'Free of course' is better expressed as 'free of charge'. Also, 'return after reading those books' should specify 'return them'. The sentence is long and needs to be broken up for clarity.