图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading different kinds of books. Usually, I spend about an hour there each time to relax and learn new things.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn còn đơn giản và lặp từ. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: In the library, I usually read books and stories, especially novels and magazines, which help me improve my vocabulary and knowledge.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và cấu trúc câu chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing games. Also, I wasn't very interested in reading at that time.

建議: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi thay vì chỉ nói 'I don't know'. Bạn có thể đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân hoặc dự đoán dựa trên hiểu biết của mình để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read and study after school.

× I often go to the libraries I like, read, reading the books.

✓ I often go to the libraries I like to read books.

The phrase 'read, reading the books' is incorrect because 'reading' is improperly used after a comma without a proper verb structure. The correct form is to use the infinitive 'to read' to express purpose. Also, 'the books' is unnecessary here; 'books' is sufficient.

× I usually reading a book.

✓ I usually read a book.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. After adverbs of frequency like 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'read' is correct.

× The much?

✓ How much?

'The much?' is incorrect. The correct question form is 'How much?' to ask about quantity or amount.

× I usually read a book and read a story in the libraries.

✓ I usually read books and stories in the libraries.

Repeating 'read' twice is redundant. Also, 'a book and read a story' is awkward; it's better to say 'read books and stories'.

× I don't go to the library when I was a kid because I prefer play in the game.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing games.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't go' with past time 'when I was a kid'. It should be past tense 'didn't go'. Also, 'prefer play' is incorrect; 'prefer playing' or 'preferred playing' is correct. 'Play in the game' is awkward; 'playing games' is better.

× Moreover, I not interested go into the libraries.

✓ Moreover, I was not interested in going to the libraries.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'was' for past tense. 'Not interested go' is incorrect; it should be 'not interested in going'. Also, 'go into the libraries' is better expressed as 'going to the libraries'.