图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at school where I can control my environment and feel more comfortable.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'a books' và sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

範例: When I am in the library, I usually read books and enjoy the quiet atmosphere to relax my mind.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoạt động bạn làm khi còn nhỏ.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred going to play zones with my friends to relax after a busy day.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chắc chắn quá nhiều. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho ý kiến của bạn.

範例: I am not sure because I am Vietnamese, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library to improve their academic performance because education is highly valued in their culture.

× To be honest, no. This is because I love studying at school to have full control over my space and more comfortable.

✓ To be honest, no. This is because I love studying at school to have full control over my space and be more comfortable.

The phrase 'more comfortable' is an adjective and needs a verb to link it properly in the sentence. The correct form is 'be more comfortable' to express the state of comfort. Without the verb 'be', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Umm, when I was in a library, I often read a books and. Enjoy my quiet place and let my head out.

✓ Umm, when I was in a library, I often read books and enjoyed my quiet place and let my head out.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past tense context 'when I was'. To maintain tense consistency, 'enjoy' should be changed to past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, 'a books' is incorrect; 'books' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× Umm, when I was in a library, I often read a books and. Enjoy my quiet place and let my head out.

✓ Umm, when I was in a library, I often read books and enjoyed my quiet place and let my head out.

'Books' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is simply 'read books'.

× Honestly no, when I was a kid I prefer to go to play zone with my friends and relax after a hectic day of playing dance in house.

✓ Honestly no, when I was a kid I preferred to go to the play zone with my friends and relax after a hectic day of playing dance in the house.

The sentence refers to past time 'when I was a kid', so the verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred'. Also, 'play zone' and 'house' need definite articles 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× Honestly no, when I was a kid I prefer to go to play zone with my friends and relax after a hectic day of playing dance in house.

✓ Honestly no, when I was a kid I preferred to go to the play zone with my friends and relax after a hectic day of playing dance in the house.

'Play zone' and 'house' are specific places and require the definite article 'the' before them. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Umm because I I'm Vietnamese so I can't say for sure but I guess umm Chinese kid will often go to the library to improve their academic performance.

✓ Umm, because I'm Vietnamese, I can't say for sure but I guess Chinese kids often go to the library to improve their academic performance.

The phrase 'I I'm' is redundant; only 'I'm' is needed. Also, 'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to agree with 'their' and to generalize the statement.