图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та деякі незрозумілі фрази. Спробуйте використовувати простіші речення, уникати зайвих пауз та уточнити інформацію, щоб відповідь була більш природною і зрозумілою.

範例: I don't go to the library often now. When I lived in my hometown, I visited the library regularly. However, since moving to Lithuania, I haven't found a library with books in Russian or Ukrainian, so I rarely go there.

建議: Ваша відповідь повторює ідеї і містить граматичні помилки. Спробуйте сформулювати чітко і логічно, використовуючи зв'язки між реченнями, щоб зробити відповідь більш зв'язною.

範例: When I was a student, I usually went to the library to research specific subjects. It was a reliable place to find information for my studies.

建議: Ваша відповідь містить помилки в граматиці та слововживанні, а також деякі незрозумілі фрази. Спробуйте чітко відповісти на питання, використовуючи правильні вирази і уникаючи протиріч (спокійне і шумне одночасно).

範例: Yes, I often went to the library as a student. I even received a medal for being a frequent visitor. I liked the calm atmosphere there, which helped me focus on my studies.

建議: Ваша відповідь є нечіткою і містить багато помилок. Намагайтеся давати більш структуровану відповідь, уникаючи повторів і використовуючи правильні граматичні конструкції.

範例: I haven't spoken to many Chinese people, so I'm not sure. However, from videos I've seen on TikTok, Chinese kids seem to study hard and often visit libraries to focus on their research.

× I used to quite often go to the library when I live in my hometown, but uh, since I had moved to Lithuania, I can find any library which, uh, include books in Russian or Ukrainian language.

✓ I used to quite often go to the library when I lived in my hometown, but uh, since I moved to Lithuania, I can't find any library which includes books in Russian or Ukrainian language.

The verb 'live' should be in the past tense 'lived' to match the past time frame indicated by 'used to'. 'Had moved' is past perfect but simple past 'moved' is more appropriate here. 'Can find' should be 'can't find' to express inability. 'Include' should be 'includes' to agree with singular 'library'.

× So unfortunately I can't go to library here.

✓ So unfortunately I can't go to the library here.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× I used to go to library for searching some information on certain subject when I was a student.

✓ I used to go to the library to search for some information on a certain subject when I was a student.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'for searching' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to search for'. 'Certain subject' needs the indefinite article 'a'.

× I mean it was a one way where I can find some information and make a research to find some information for my studying.

✓ I mean it was one way where I could find some information and do research for my studies.

'A one way' should be 'one way' without 'a'. 'Make a research' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do research'. 'For my studying' is better expressed as 'for my studies'. Also, 'can' should be 'could' to match past tense.

× I was a frequently visitor a library.

✓ I was a frequent visitor to the library.

'Frequently' is an adverb; the adjective 'frequent' should be used here. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' with the preposition 'to' after 'visitor'.

× So I like how this place offers you quite calm and noisy space for your researchers.

✓ So I like how this place offers you quite a calm and quiet space for your research.

'Calm and noisy' is contradictory; likely 'quiet' was intended. 'Space' needs the article 'a'. 'Researchers' should be 'research' as an uncountable noun here.

× I have never talked with natives Chinese so I can't say 100% what they do but as I saw a numerous in a numerous video in Tiktok, they are really addicted with studying and quite often go to the library for some research and I think it's a place where I can where they can focus.

✓ I have never talked with native Chinese people so I can't say 100% what they do but as I saw in numerous videos on TikTok, they are really addicted to studying and quite often go to the library for some research and I think it's a place where they can focus.

'Natives Chinese' should be 'native Chinese people'. 'A numerous in a numerous video' is incorrect; it should be 'in numerous videos'. 'Addicted with' should be 'addicted to'. 'Where I can where they can focus' is redundant; 'where they can focus' is correct.