图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), give one brief reason and one short supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and avoid double negatives and unnecessary words.

範例: I don’t go to the library very often because there isn’t one near my home. However, I love reading, so when I have time I sometimes travel to a nearby city to borrow books.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and then give specific activities with correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, such as) and correct verb forms. Keep it to 2–4 sentences max and be specific about types of books.

範例: I usually read books to improve my knowledge. For example, I often choose science and math books, and sometimes I read articles about current world events to stay informed.

建議: Answer directly with past tense and a brief reason or contrasting detail. Avoid tense errors and run-on sentences. Limit to one or two supporting sentences with clear connectors (but, however).

範例: No, I didn’t go to the library when I was a child because there wasn’t one near our house. However, I always loved books and dreamed of being a librarian so I could read many different titles.

建議: Be cautious when generalizing about other groups. Start with a hedging phrase (I’m not sure, but…), then give evidence or an example and avoid repeating words. Use correct nouns and plural forms and keep it concise.

範例: I’m not sure, but from films and documentaries it seems many Chinese children visit libraries regularly, sometimes twice a week. They often study or read school-related books such as math textbooks and storybooks.

× Maybe sometimes. Actually my place is not don't have any library, so I rarely go to the library. But I love to reading book, so I refer go to library.

✓ Maybe sometimes. Actually my place does not have a library, so I rarely go to the library. But I love reading books, so I prefer to go to the library.

Issues: (1) 'my place is not don't have any library' is ungrammatical; correct form uses 'does not have' for negative with singular subject 'place' (Grammar problem type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement and 6: Present tense issue). (2) 'love to reading book' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'love reading' or 'love to read' and 'books' plural (IDs 8: Verb + -ing form and 1: Singular and plural issue). (3) 'refer go to library' is incorrect word choice and missing preposition/article; use 'prefer to go to the library' (IDs 26: Sentence structure errors and 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/22: Article errors). Suggestions: Use 'does not have' for a singular third person subject, use 'love reading' or 'love to read' consistently, make 'book' plural when speaking generally, and use 'prefer to go to the library' with the definite article 'the'.

× In the library I usually reading books or explore some news book to improve my knowledge, example like science book or math book and maybe sometime some article about the world.

✓ In the library I usually read books or explore new books to improve my knowledge, for example science books or math books and sometimes articles about the world.

Issues: (1) 'I usually reading' is incorrect: after adverb of frequency use base verb 'read' (ID 6: Present tense issue and 8: Verb + -ing form). (2) 'explore some news book' should be 'explore new books' — 'news' vs 'new' and plural 'books' for general reference (ID 1: Singular and plural issue and 13: Incorrect use of adjectives). (3) 'example like' should be 'for example' or 'such as' (ID 26: Sentence structure errors). (4) 'maybe sometime some article' should be 'sometimes articles' (IDs 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers and 1: Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: Use simple present 'read' with frequency adverbs, use 'new' not 'news' for adjective, make nouns plural when speaking generally, and use set phrase 'for example'.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I were young and I wanted to be a librarian to read all the books on there and I love reading books so much.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was young and I wanted to be a librarian to read all the books there, and I love reading books so much.

Issues: (1) 'when I were young' — use past tense singular form 'was' (ID 5: Past tense issue and 27: Subject-verb agreement). (2) 'books on there' is incorrect preposition; use 'books there' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: Use 'was' with I in past descriptions, and drop unnecessary preposition 'on' when saying 'books there'.

× I don't know because I'm a Vietnamese but I can see in the film or the movies. Chinese kids often go to the library twice a week and they often read sign books or math book and sometime they go the to the library to.

✓ I don't know because I'm Vietnamese, but I have seen in films that Chinese kids often go to the library twice a week and they often read science books or math books and sometimes they go to the library too.

Issues: (1) 'I'm a Vietnamese' — nationality normally used without article: 'I'm Vietnamese' (ID 22: Article errors and 12: Incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives). (2) 'I can see in the film or the movies' — better 'I have seen in films' to match experience and plural 'films' (ID 6: Present tense issue). (3) 'sign books' likely 'science books' and 'math book' should be plural 'math books' (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and 1: Singular and plural issue). (4) 'sometime they go the to the library to' has word order and redundant 'to' issues; correct 'sometimes they go to the library too' (ID 26: Sentence structure errors and 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: Use 'I'm Vietnamese' without 'a', use 'I have seen' or 'I saw' depending on context, correct 'sign' to 'science', make general nouns plural, and use 'too' for 'also' at end of clause and correct word order 'go to the library'.