鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, for example, stating whether you like buying shoes or not, and how often you do so. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: I don't particularly like buying shoes because I only own two or three pairs. Therefore, I don't buy shoes very often.

建議: Your answer is brief and grammatically incomplete. It is better to give a full sentence and, if possible, add a reason or additional detail to enrich your response.

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in a store before purchasing.

建議: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Provide a clear and direct response with correct vocabulary and grammar. Specify the currency and amount clearly.

範例: I usually spend around 10 to 15 dollars on shoes, as I prefer affordable options.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for my feet, and I can wear them for long periods without pain.

× For me, it's not I like shoes, but it's not I I have two or three shoes only.

✓ For me, it's not that I like shoes, but I only have two or three pairs of shoes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's not I like shoes' and repeats 'I' unnecessarily. The pronoun 'I' is misused here. The corrected sentence uses 'that I like shoes' to clarify the meaning and removes redundancy. Also, 'pairs of shoes' is more appropriate than just 'shoes' when counting.

× I'm not often to buy it.

✓ I don't often buy them.

The phrase 'I'm not often to buy it' is grammatically incorrect. The adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb 'buy'. Also, 'them' is used instead of 'it' because 'shoes' is plural.

× No, I never.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it unclear. Adding 'have never bought shoes online' completes the sentence and fits the question context.

× I think he's 15. Oh, no 10s or $15.

✓ I think it's $15, or maybe $10 to $15.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used to refer to money. 'It' is the correct pronoun for things or amounts. Also, '10s' is unclear; specifying the range as '$10 to $15' is clearer.

× Comfortable for me. I like the comfort place so I prefer the comfortable shoes. Shoes.

✓ Comfortable for me. I like comfort, so I prefer comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'comfort place' is incorrect; 'comfort' as a noun is appropriate. Also, repeating 'shoes' is unnecessary. The adjective 'comfortable' correctly describes 'shoes'.