鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas and using linking words.

範例: Yes, I love buying shoes, especially during traditional festivals, family gatherings, or when I travel. I enjoy shopping for shoes on these occasions because it feels special.

建議: Focus on correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be more specific about why you prefer online shopping.

範例: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I find it convenient and enjoyable. Since I don't have much time to visit malls, online shopping saves me time and offers a wide selection.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your spending habits.

範例: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes because I prefer affordable and comfortable options. I often buy shoes when brands have special offers or discounts.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid unclear phrases. Be specific about why you prefer comfortable shoes.

範例: I always prefer comfortable shoes because they prevent foot pain and make walking easier. Additionally, fashionable shoes tend to be expensive and are not always practical for me.

× That time I buying shoes and I enjoy when I buying that.

✓ At that time, I buy shoes and I enjoy buying them.

The verb 'buying' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I buy' for simple present tense and 'enjoy buying' with the gerund form after 'enjoy'.

× Yes, most of the time I bought shoes online because I always prefer to online shopping and it was so much enjoyable for me and I have not too much time to go in the shopping mall and choose shows that's why I prefer online.

✓ Yes, most of the time I buy shoes online because I always prefer online shopping and it is very enjoyable for me. I don't have much time to go to the shopping mall and choose shoes, that's why I prefer online.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Bought' should be 'buy' to match 'most of the time' (present habitual). 'Prefer to online shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer online shopping'. 'Was so much enjoyable' should be 'is very enjoyable'. 'Have not too much time' should be 'don't have much time'. 'Go in the shopping mall' should be 'go to the shopping mall'. 'Choose shows' should be 'choose shoes'.

× I always buy comfortable and when the brands are offering that time I usually buying shoes.

✓ I always buy comfortable shoes, and when the brands are offering, I usually buy shoes.

The phrase 'I usually buying shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually buy shoes' because 'usually' is followed by the base verb in simple present tense. Also, 'I always buy comfortable' is incomplete; it should be 'comfortable shoes'.

× Comfortable shoes make me feel comforted and also it's not have a foot pain I easily walking that's why I prefer comfortable shoes

✓ Comfortable shoes make me feel comfortable, and they don't cause foot pain. I can walk easily, that's why I prefer comfortable shoes.

'Feel comforted' is incorrect; it should be 'feel comfortable'. 'It's not have a foot pain' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'they don't cause foot pain'. 'I easily walking' is incorrect; it should be 'I can walk easily'. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammar.