鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often because a good pair usually lasts a long time. However, I often buy new shoes during holidays to feel more confident and attractive.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'I bought a pair of shoes online' thay vì 'I put a pair of shoes online'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient. For example, last month I bought a beautiful pair that fit my feet perfectly. Moreover, I got a discount, so I paid less.

建議: Bạn cần làm rõ đơn vị tiền tệ và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'with naphtha'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: I usually spend about 500,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes. I think this is reasonable because I only buy shoes occasionally and they last a long time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích giày thoải mái.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because although fashionable shoes look stylish, they often don't fit well and make my feet feel hot. Comfortable shoes provide better support and allow my feet to breathe, which is important since I walk a lot.

× But in holiday I always buy a new shoes to make me more confident and attractive.

✓ But in holidays I always buy new shoes to make me more confident and attractive.

The noun 'holiday' should be pluralized to 'holidays' to indicate repeated occasions. Also, 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'new shoes' without 'a'.

× Yes, as you knows, buying something online is very convenient.

✓ Yes, as you know, buying something online is very convenient.

The pronoun 'you' always takes the base form of the verb 'know' without 's'. 'You knows' is incorrect subject-verb agreement.

× For instance, last month I put a pair of shoes online and it was very beautiful and suitable for my feet.

✓ For instance, last month I bought a pair of shoes online and they were very beautiful and suitable for my feet.

The verb 'put' is incorrect in this context; 'bought' fits the meaning. Also, 'a pair of shoes' is singular, but 'they' is more natural to refer to shoes. 'It was very beautiful' should be 'they were very beautiful' to agree with plural 'shoes'.

× Furthermore, I also have some discount so I could pay less.

✓ Furthermore, I also had some discount so I could pay less.

'Some discount' is acceptable but 'had some discount' fits better in past tense context. Also, 'could' is correct here as past modal.

× Well I don't remember exactly but I think it's about 500,000 with naphtha.

✓ Well, I don't remember exactly but I think it's about 500,000 VND.

The phrase 'with naphtha' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should specify the currency, e.g., 'VND' for Vietnamese Dong.

× I truly ever feel comfortable shoes because although fashionable suits look very stylish, they are often not suitable for my feet and make them feel hot.

✓ I truly prefer comfortable shoes because although fashionable shoes look very stylish, they are often not suitable for my feet and make them feel hot.

The phrase 'I truly ever feel comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'prefer comfortable shoes' is more appropriate. Also, 'fashionable suits' should be 'fashionable shoes' to match the context.

× On the other hand, comfortable to provide better support and allow my feet to create, which is important for me especially when I have to walk a lot.

✓ On the other hand, comfortable shoes provide better support and allow my feet to breathe, which is important for me especially when I have to walk a lot.

The sentence lacks a subject after 'comfortable'. Adding 'shoes' clarifies meaning. Also, 'allow my feet to create' is incorrect; it should be 'allow my feet to breathe'.