鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够完整，句子未结束，缺少连贯性。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免中断，并且可以增加具体细节说明购买鞋子的频率和原因。

範例: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes; I usually purchase a new pair only when my old ones are worn out, which happens about every six months to a year. I prefer high-quality shoes because they last longer and provide better comfort.

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子未完成，表达不清晰。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅，并完整表达观点。

範例: Yes, I often buy shoes online. However, I usually try them on first in a physical store to find my exact size. Once I know my size, I feel confident buying the same brand online. But if it's a new brand, I prefer to try them on in person first.

建議: 回答中有重复和不流畅的表达，建议简洁明了地说明花费范围，并避免重复。

範例: I usually spend around 1000 RMB on shoes, but sometimes I might spend up to 1500 RMB if the shoes are of good quality.

建議: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅，同时注意语法准确性。

範例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot and enjoy taking walks. If the shoes are uncomfortable, my feet hurt for one or two weeks, which is definitely not worth it.

× I only buy them when I really need a new pair which is about 6 months or sometimes even up to a year.

✓ I only buy them when I really need a new pair, which is about every 6 months or sometimes even up to a year.

句子缺少逗号，导致结构不清晰。需要在“pair”和“which”之间加逗号，表示非限制性定语从句，使句意明确。

× And I always buy high quality shoes which last longer and.

✓ And I always buy high-quality shoes which last longer.

句子末尾有不完整的“and”，导致句子不完整。应去掉“and”使句子完整。

× Yes I buy shoes online very often but I usually try them on and buy a new pair in a physical store and after that I know my exact size which is comfortable for me and then I'll just keep buying them online.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online very often, but I usually try them on and buy a new pair in a physical store first. After that, I know my exact size which is comfortable for me, and then I'll just keep buying them online.

原句过长且缺少标点，导致表达不清晰。应拆分为两个句子，并加上逗号，使句子结构清晰。

× But it will be different if it's another brand.

✓ But it will be different if it's a different brand.

“another brand”用法不当，应使用“a different brand”表示“不同的品牌”，更符合语境。

× So for every newborn brand you have to.

✓ So for every new brand, you have to try them on.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分。应补充完整句子，使表达完整。

× It's around. It's around 1000 RMB is totally OK for me, but sometime it's up to $1500 RMB.

✓ It's around 1000 RMB, which is totally OK for me, but sometimes it can be up to 1500 RMB.

句子中“It's around.”重复且不完整，且“sometime”应为“sometimes”，另外“$1500 RMB”中美元符号和人民币单位混用，应去掉美元符号。

× If it's some shoes that's not very comfortable, my feet keep hurting for one or two weeks.

✓ If it's some shoes that are not very comfortable, my feet keep hurting for one or two weeks.

“shoes”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是“is”。

× That just doesn't worth it.

✓ That just isn't worth it.

“worth”是形容词，不能与助动词“doesn't”连用，正确表达应为“isn't worth it”。