鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often, usually once a month. I enjoy updating my wardrobe with new shoes to keep up with the latest trends. Sometimes, I buy shoes for special occasions or to match specific outfits.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về trải nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. I needed new shoes for my school uniform, so I chose a pair that matched it well. Buying online was convenient because I could compare different styles easily.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về số tiền bạn thường chi tiêu, giải thích lý do và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually spend between 500 and 1000 on a pair of shoes. Since I am a student, I have to be careful with my budget, so I don't buy shoes very often.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn cân bằng giữa thời trang và sự thoải mái. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. If shoes are not stylish, I don't like wearing them, but if they are uncomfortable, I can't wear them for long. Therefore, I think it's important to find a balance between the two.

× I really like buy in shoes every month because it helps me train at outfits or keep a wedge trendy.

✓ I really like buying shoes every month because it helps me train my outfits or keep a wedge trendy.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'buy' should be corrected to 'buying'. Also, 'buy in shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'buying shoes'.

× I really like buy in shoes every month because it helps me train at outfits or keep a wedge trendy.

✓ I really like buying shoes every month because it helps me coordinate outfits or keep a wedge trendy.

The phrase 'train at outfits' is incorrect. The correct preposition and verb should be 'coordinate outfits' or 'match outfits'. 'Train at' is not appropriate here.

× I really love buying shoes for new spray or sometime.

✓ I really love buying shoes for new styles or sometimes.

The word 'spray' is likely a misused word here; 'styles' fits better in context. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, I bought shoe unlike lessman because I prepare for my new school and I want to change my outfit uniform so I want to choose a shoe to suit it.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes unlike lessman because I prepared for my new school and I want to change my uniform outfit so I want to choose shoes to suit it.

The singular 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when referring generally. Also, 'outfit uniform' is better as 'uniform outfit'.

× Yes, I bought shoe unlike lessman because I prepare for my new school and I want to change my outfit uniform so I want to choose a shoe to suit it.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes unlike lessman because I prepared for my new school and I wanted to change my uniform outfit so I wanted to choose shoes to suit it.

The verb 'prepare' should be in past tense 'prepared' to match the past action 'bought'. Similarly, 'want' should be 'wanted' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I bought shoe unlike lessman because I prepare for my new school and I want to change my outfit uniform so I want to choose a shoe to suit it.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes unlike lessman because I prepared for my new school and I wanted to change my uniform outfit so I wanted to choose shoes to suit it.

The singular 'a shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when referring generally.

× That's a loss of money. I think it's about 500 to 1000 a pair.

✓ That's a lot of money. I think it's about 500 to 1000 per pair.

The phrase 'a loss of money' is incorrect here; 'a lot of money' is appropriate. Also, 'a pair' should be preceded by 'per' to indicate cost per pair.

× So I sometimes I buy it because I'm a student, so I'm not I'm not enough money for my new shoes.

✓ So sometimes I buy them because I'm a student and I don't have enough money for new shoes.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect structure. 'I sometimes I buy it' should be 'sometimes I buy them'. 'I'm not I'm not enough money' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have enough money'.

× So I sometimes I buy it because I'm a student, so I'm not I'm not enough money for my new shoes.

✓ So sometimes I buy them because I'm a student and I don't have enough money for new shoes.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' which is plural.

× In my opinion I think two options is very necessary for me because if I bring a pair of shoes, if not fashionable I don't really like it and if it's UN uncomfortable I don't realize.

✓ In my opinion, I think two options are very necessary for me because if I wear a pair of shoes that is not fashionable, I don't really like it and if it's uncomfortable, I don't enjoy it.

The subject 'two options' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'bring' is incorrect; 'wear' is appropriate for shoes. 'UN uncomfortable' should be 'uncomfortable'. 'I don't realize' is unclear; 'I don't enjoy it' fits better.

× So I think it's very important to balance something.

✓ So I think it's very important to balance both.

The phrase 'balance something' is vague. 'Balance both' clarifies balancing two aspects (fashionable and comfortable).