鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。可以先直接回答喜欢买鞋，然后简要说明原因，避免句子结构混乱。

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often. In China, many young people buy fancy and designer shoes to show their social status, and I do the same.

建議: 回答应更简洁，避免重复和语法错误。可以先直接回答买过，然后说明原因，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because I am not very rich. Therefore, I wait for special discounts that usually appear online rather than in physical stores.

建議: 回答时应注意语法和表达准确，避免口语化的“like”用法。可以直接说明价格并换算成不同货币。

範例: I usually spend around 3000 Chinese Yuan on shoes, which is approximately 500 British pounds or 700 US dollars per pair.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误，应完整表达观点并避免口头语。可以先给出总体偏好，再具体说明不同场合的选择。

範例: It depends on the occasion. For parties, I prefer fashionable and expensive shoes, but for daily life, I choose comfortable shoes.

× Yes I do in my culture in China, young generation buying fancy shoes, expensive shoes like designer products to show their social status and so am I.

✓ Yes, I do. In my culture in China, the young generation buys fancy shoes, expensive shoes like designer products to show their social status, and so do I.

句中“young generation buying”缺少谓语动词，应改为“the young generation buys”，因为“generation”是单数名词，动词需用第三人称单数形式。

× Yes I do 'cause as I just said, I'm not kind of rich people, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait from special discount and it always show up online instead of instead of shops.

✓ Yes, I do, because as I just said, I'm not the kind of rich person, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait for special discounts and they always show up online instead of in shops.

“wait from special discount”中介词用错，应为“wait for special discounts”；“it always show up”主语为复数，应改为“they always show up”；“kind of rich people”应为单数形式“kind of rich person”。

× Yes I do 'cause as I just said, I'm not kind of rich people, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait from special discount and it always show up online instead of instead of shops.

✓ Yes, I do, because as I just said, I'm not the kind of rich person, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait for special discounts and they always show up online instead of in shops.

“kind of rich people”应为单数“kind of rich person”，因为这里指的是一种类型的人，需用单数形式。

× Yes I do 'cause as I just said, I'm not kind of rich people, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait from special discount and it always show up online instead of instead of shops.

✓ Yes, I do, because as I just said, I'm not the kind of rich person, so if I want to buy some designer products, like really expensive ones, I need to wait for special discounts and they always show up online instead of in shops.

“wait from special discount”中介词“from”用错，应为“wait for”；“instead of shops”应为“instead of in shops”，表示“在商店里”。

× Oh it's a lot around CN¥3000. I mean like 500 lbs or 700 U.S. dollars per shoes.

✓ Oh, it's a lot, around CN¥3000. I mean like 500 lbs or 700 U.S. dollars per pair of shoes.

“per shoes”中“shoes”是复数，前面有“per”表示单个单位，应改为“per pair of shoes”。

× Oh it's a lot around CN¥3000. I mean like 500 lbs or 700 U.S. dollars per shoes.

✓ Oh, it's a lot, around CN¥3000. I mean like 500 lbs or 700 U.S. dollars per pair of shoes.

“per shoes”中缺少“pair of”，因为鞋子通常以“一双”为单位计价。

× Umm, well, it depends. If I show up at some parties, I much prefer expensive shoes with, uh, fashionable design for sure. But for daily life? Like for daily life and.

✓ Umm, well, it depends. If I show up at some parties, I much prefer expensive shoes with, uh, fashionable designs for sure. But for daily life, I prefer comfortable shoes.

句子末尾“Like for daily life and.”不完整，缺少谓语和完整表达，应补充完整句子以表达意思。