鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lặp từ và câu dài dòng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really like buying shoes, but I only buy new sneakers when I need them. Usually, I purchase new pairs at the start of the school year or during the New Year holiday.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và "umm" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc, ví dụ như "because", "so".

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient. Shopping online saves me time since I don't have to go to the store, and the prices are usually cheaper.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: I usually spend about 2 million Vietnamese dong on shoes because I prefer quality over quantity. For example, last year I bought three pairs of shoes that were comfortable and durable.

建議: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác và tránh câu bị bỏ dở. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: To be honest, I prefer fashionable shoes because they come in various styles and help me express my personality. However, when I exercise, I usually choose comfortable shoes to protect my feet and avoid injuries.

× Just I really like buying shoes but I only do it when I need a new pair sneaker I'm use.

✓ I really just like buying shoes but I only do it when I need a new pair of sneakers to use.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'Just I really like' should be 'I really just like' to follow English word order. Also, 'a new pair sneaker I'm use' is incorrect; it should be 'a new pair of sneakers to use' to correctly use the quantifier and preposition.

× I'm often buy new sneaker around the start of the new school year and the new year holiday.

✓ I often buy new sneakers around the start of the new school year and the New Year holiday.

The noun 'sneaker' should be plural 'sneakers' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'I'm often buy' is incorrect; it should be 'I often buy' to match subject-verb agreement and tense.

× Yes, I've bought shoes online, uh, because I find it's uh, convenient to see a lot of friends and the side umm.

✓ Yes, I've bought shoes online because I find it's convenient to see a lot of styles on the site.

The phrase 'see a lot of friends and the side' is incorrect. It likely meant 'see a lot of styles on the site.' The preposition 'on' is used with 'site' and 'styles' is the correct noun here.

× Also, I I shopping online save me time since I don't have to go to store and uh, the price is cheaper.

✓ Also, shopping online saves me time since I don't have to go to the store, and the prices are cheaper.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and missing articles. 'I I shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping' as the subject. 'Save' should be 'saves' to agree with singular subject 'shopping.' 'Go to store' needs the article 'the store.' 'Price is cheaper' should be plural 'prices are cheaper'.

× I usually spend on suit around 2 Vietnamese dumb 2 million Vietnamese dumb uh, for uh, because I prefer quality over quantity.

✓ I usually spend around 2 million Vietnamese dong because I prefer quality over quantity.

The phrase 'spend on suit' is incorrect and unclear. 'Vietnamese dumb' is a misspelling of 'Vietnamese dong.' The quantifier 'around 2 million Vietnamese dong' is sufficient without repetition.

× For example, uh, last year I umm, I bought 3 pairs uh, and I, I found.

✓ For example, last year I bought 3 pairs, and I found them very useful.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object after 'I found.' Adding 'them very useful' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Well to be honest I am keen on fashionable so because it's come in a variety style and help me express my personality.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am keen on fashionable shoes because they come in a variety of styles and help me express my personality.

'Keen on fashionable so' is incorrect; it should be 'keen on fashionable shoes.' 'Come in a variety style' should be 'come in a variety of styles' to use the correct preposition and plural noun.

× However, when I do sport or exercise I usually choose comfortable suit to protect my feet and avoid.

✓ However, when I do sports or exercise, I usually choose comfortable shoes to protect my feet and avoid injury.

'Sport' should be plural 'sports.' 'Comfortable suit' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes.' The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'injury' completes the meaning.