鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

× I never bought a shoes online because I I want to try them on.

✓ I have never bought shoes online because I want to try them on.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, the present perfect tense 'have never bought' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now.

× If I bought online I can't try them on.

✓ If I buy online, I can't try them on.

The sentence mixes past tense 'bought' with present tense 'can't'. For a general truth or habitual action, the present tense 'buy' should be used in the conditional clause.

× Maybe I'm when I buy a sneaker I I'll pay ¥10,000.

✓ Maybe when I buy sneakers, I'll pay ¥10,000.

The phrase 'a sneaker' is acceptable but 'sneakers' is more natural when talking about shoes in general. Also, the phrase 'I'm when' is incorrect and should be removed.

× if I bought a leather shoes it's quite expensive.

✓ If I buy leather shoes, they're quite expensive.

'A leather shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, the tense should be present to match the conditional statement.

× I prefer to comfortable shoes but if I go to party or some special event I wear.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes, but if I go to a party or some special event, I wear...

The phrase 'to comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun without 'to'. Also, 'go to party' needs the article 'a' before 'party'. The sentence is incomplete and should be finished for clarity.