鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific details using linking words. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like 'different type of shoes' which should be 'different types of shoes'.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes as it is one of my hobbies. I usually buy different types of shoes, such as sports shoes, formal shoes, and casual ones. Moreover, I like to purchase new shoes every two or three months to keep my collection updated.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correcting grammar, for example, 'I don't have time to go to the market'. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because sometimes I don't have time to go to the market. Additionally, online shopping gives me the option to choose from different brands easily.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct phrases like 'different type of shoes' to 'different types of shoes'.

範例: I usually spend around 2,000 to 3,000 rupees on shoes every two or three months. This is because I like to wear different types of shoes and have a large collection.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition, such as 'comfortable shoes' mentioned multiple times.

範例: I always prefer comfortable shoes, especially sports shoes, because running is my hobby. Since I am health conscious, I choose soft and comfortable footwear for running and exercising.

× I wear different type of shoes like sport shoes, formal and casual and after two or three months I like to buy shoes.

✓ I wear different types of shoes like sports shoes, formal and casual, and after two or three months I like to buy shoes.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple kinds of shoes. Also, 'sport shoes' should be 'sports shoes' as the correct plural form. This improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× sometimes I don't have time to going to the market

✓ sometimes I don't have time to go to the market

After 'have time to', the base form of the verb 'go' should be used, not the gerund 'going'. This is a common modal verb usage rule in English.

× I choose I have a option to choose a different type of brands.

✓ I choose; I have an option to choose different types of brands.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'option'. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple brands. Additionally, 'brands' is plural, so 'different types of brands' is correct.

× I never, I never give a thought, but I think 2 or ₹3000 I spend on shoes after two or three months because I like to wear different type of shoes and I have so many shoes in my collection.

✓ I never, I never give it a thought, but I think I spend 2 or ₹3000 on shoes after two or three months because I like to wear different types of shoes and I have so many shoes in my collection.

The phrase 'give a thought' is incomplete; it should be 'give it a thought'. Also, 'different type of shoes' should be 'different types of shoes' to match plural usage.