鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için, doğrudan soruya yanıt verip, nedenlerinizi açık ve net bir şekilde belirtmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi 5 cümleyi geçmeyecek şekilde tutmalısınız.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes once a year because my mother prefers me to have only one pair. I would like to have more shoes, but I respect her opinion.

建議: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve tekrarlar var. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp, neden online alışveriş yapmadığınızı açık ve net bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız ifadeleri çıkarmalısınız.

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am usually too busy. I prefer to buy shoes in stores where I can try them on.

建議: Cevabınız anlaşılmaz ve konudan sapmış. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayarak, genellikle ayakkabılara ne kadar para harcadığınızı açıkça belirtmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi mantıklı ve tutarlı hale getirmelisiniz.

範例: I usually spend around 200 Turkish lira on shoes. It depends on the brand and quality.

建議: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmişsiniz ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı geliştirilmelidir. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

範例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Fashionable shoes are important for special occasions like anniversaries, while comfortable shoes are better for everyday use.

× I want to three or four shoes for myself, but my mom never lets me to buy a shoes I have just one.

✓ I want to buy three or four pairs of shoes for myself, but my mom never lets me buy shoes; I have just one pair.

The phrase 'I want to three or four shoes' is missing the verb 'buy' and the correct quantifier for shoes is 'pairs' since shoes come in pairs. Also, 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'a pair of shoes'. The sentence also incorrectly uses 'lets me to buy' instead of 'lets me buy'.

× my mom never lets me to buy a shoes

✓ my mom never lets me buy shoes

The verb 'let' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Therefore, 'lets me to buy' should be 'lets me buy'.

× a shoes I have just one

✓ shoes; I have just one pair

The word 'shoes' is plural, so it cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Instead, use 'one pair of shoes' to indicate a single set.

× How often? Uh, one year A1 I guess.

✓ How often? Uh, once a year, I guess.

The phrase 'one year A1' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correct expression to indicate frequency is 'once a year'.

× No, I don't because I'm really busy for life shopping.

✓ No, I don't because I'm really busy with life and shopping.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate being occupied with something is 'with'. Also, 'life shopping' is unclear; separating 'life' and 'shopping' clarifies the meaning.

× I don't want to. Umm, I don't want to, but I don't want to buy shoes only.

✓ I don't want to. Umm, I don't want to, but I don't want to buy only shoes.

The placement of 'only' is incorrect. It should be placed before 'shoes' to correctly express the meaning of not wanting to buy just shoes.

× My last shoes was like I could be cuisine bash, but this is my that's this is Turkish lira so I don't know how to. Of of of chocolate.

✓ My last shoes were like a cuisine bash, but this is mine; that's in Turkish lira, so I don't know how to convert it.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. The original sentence is unclear and seems to have unrelated words; the correction attempts to make it coherent by assuming intended meaning. 'That's this is Turkish lira' is corrected to 'that's in Turkish lira'.

× My last shoes was like I could be cuisine bash, but this is my that's this is Turkish lira so I don't know how to.

✓ My last shoes were like a cuisine bash, but these are mine; that's in Turkish lira, so I don't know how to convert it.

The pronoun 'this' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural; it should be 'these'. Also, 'my' should be 'mine' to correctly function as a pronoun here.

× I do both them 'cause fashionable shoes is uh essential for uh private days like anniversary or birthdays, but comfortable shoes are essential for daily routine.

✓ I do both because fashionable shoes are essential for private days like anniversaries or birthdays, but comfortable shoes are essential for the daily routine.

The phrase 'both them' is incorrect; it should be 'both'. Also, 'shoes is' should be 'shoes are' due to plural subject-verb agreement. 'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries' to match 'birthdays'. 'Daily routine' needs the definite article 'the'.

× fashionable shoes is uh essential for uh private days

✓ fashionable shoes are essential for private days

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.