鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love buying shoes because they fascinate me. Usually, I buy three or four pairs each month, although I know it's not wise to spend so much money on unnecessary items.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition, such as 'I I'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to ensure they fit perfectly. Therefore, I usually visit physical stores to find the right pair.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to be more specific about the amount or range of money you spend. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: I spend quite a lot of money on shoes since it's my passion. I own many pairs in different colors to match every outfit, and I enjoy keeping them in my collection.

建議: Reduce filler words and try to use more varied vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and make your answer more fluent.

範例: I wholeheartedly prefer fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and energy. Since I am short, I usually wear heels, which give me great pleasure whenever I go out.

× I usually buy, uh, 3 or 4 shoes in a month.

✓ I usually buy, uh, 3 or 4 pairs of shoes in a month.

The word 'shoes' is countable and usually referred to in pairs. Saying '3 or 4 shoes' is incorrect because it implies individual shoes rather than pairs. The correct phrase is '3 or 4 pairs of shoes' to indicate the number of complete shoes bought.

× I know that it's not correct to spend so much, umm, currency on, uh, some unuseful stuff.

✓ I know that it's not correct to spend so much, umm, money on, uh, some useless stuff.

The word 'currency' refers to the system of money in general, not the amount spent. 'Money' is the correct term here. Also, 'unuseful' is not a standard adjective; the correct word is 'useless' to describe something without use.

× No, I actually didn't buy any shoes from online because I thought that I need to wear that to see that exactly it fits me or not.

✓ No, I actually didn't buy any shoes online because I thought that I needed to try them on to see if they fit me exactly or not.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I need' should be 'I needed' to match the past tense context. Also, 'from online' is incorrect; 'online' alone suffices. 'Wear that' is better expressed as 'try them on' when referring to shoes.

× No, I actually didn't buy any shoes from online because I thought that I need to wear that to see that exactly it fits me or not.

✓ No, I actually didn't buy any shoes online because I thought that I needed to try them on to see if they fit me exactly or not.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary before 'online'. The correct phrase is 'buy shoes online'. Also, 'to see that exactly it fits me or not' is awkward; 'to see if they fit me exactly or not' is clearer.

× And having a perfect shoe I I prefer to go physically to the shops.

✓ And to have the perfect shoes, I prefer to go physically to the shops.

The phrase 'having a perfect shoe I I prefer' is grammatically incorrect and awkward. It should be rephrased to 'to have the perfect shoes' to express purpose. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error.

× I have several shoes for several colors and it actually matches my every outfit and I love to keep them as uh, in my collection.

✓ I have several pairs of shoes in several colors and they actually match every outfit, and I love to keep them in my collection.

'Several shoes' should be 'several pairs of shoes' because shoes come in pairs. 'It actually matches' should be 'they actually match' to agree with the plural subject 'pairs of shoes'. 'My every outfit' is better as 'every outfit'.