鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai như "Sure" thay vì "shoes". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because I like to have many different styles, such as sneakers and casual shoes. I usually buy new shoes when my old ones become worn out or look old. Sometimes, I shop for shoes both in physical stores and online.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "most of my shoes are bought in online shops". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

範例: Yes, of course. Most of my shoes are bought from online shops because I find them very convenient for choosing many types of shoes. Therefore, I really like shopping online.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về số tiền hoặc mức chi tiêu, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes. I prefer to buy casual shoes made of long-lasting materials to ensure good quality.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp như "bowl" và "indirectly". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời liên kết các ý một cách logic.

範例: I like both. When I attend important occasions, I wear fashionable shoes, but for school or work, I prefer comfortable shoes.

× I really enjoy buying Sure because I like to have many different styles, structures, sneakers and casual shoes.

✓ I really enjoy buying shoes because I like to have many different styles, structures, sneakers, and casual shoes.

The word 'Sure' is incorrect and should be 'shoes'. Also, 'sneakers' and 'casual shoes' are plural, so 'shoes' should be plural to match the list. This correction fixes the singular/plural inconsistency and the incorrect word usage.

× I usually buy new shoes when my old one become worn out or look old.

✓ I usually buy new shoes when my old ones become worn out or look old.

The subject 'old one' should be plural 'old ones' to agree with 'shoes' which is plural. Also, the verb 'become' should be 'become' to agree with plural subject 'ones'.

× Sometime I shop for sure both in store.

✓ Sometimes I shop for shoes both in stores.

The phrase 'shop for sure' is incorrect; it should be 'shop for shoes'. Also, 'both in store' should be 'both in stores' to indicate multiple locations. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, of course most of my shoe are born in online shop.

✓ Yes, of course most of my shoes are bought in online shops.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match 'most of'. 'Born' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'bought'. 'Online shop' should be plural 'online shops' to indicate multiple sources.

× I think online shop are convenient to choose many type of shoe.

✓ I think online shops are convenient to choose many types of shoes.

'Online shop' should be plural 'online shops' to agree with 'are'. 'Many type' should be 'many types' to be plural. 'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match 'types'.

× So I very like both in online shop.

✓ So I really like shopping in online shops.

The phrase 'I very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like'. 'Both in online shop' is unclear; 'shopping in online shops' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I don't usually spend a lot of money on shores, I just want to a casual shoe with umm long lasting material to ensure I get.

✓ I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes; I just want a casual shoe with long-lasting material to ensure it lasts.

'Shores' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. The phrase 'want to a casual shoe' is incorrect; it should be 'want a casual shoe'. Added 'it lasts' to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× I like bowl.

✓ I like both.

'Bowl' is a typo or incorrect word; the intended word is 'both' to indicate preference for two options.

× When I join the important occasion I will wear fashionable shoe and indirectly I will wear comfortable shirt to school or work.

✓ When I attend important occasions, I wear fashionable shoes, and usually I wear comfortable shoes to school or work.

'Join the important occasion' should be 'attend important occasions'. 'Fashionable shoe' should be plural 'fashionable shoes'. 'Indirectly' is incorrect; 'usually' or 'generally' fits better. 'Comfortable shirt' should be 'comfortable shoes' to match the context.