鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有较多语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

範例: I don't really like buying shoes often because I usually keep a pair for a long time. I mostly wear sneakers since I need comfortable shoes for running and teaching.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时避免重复词汇，使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient. I can order many pairs at once, try them at home, and return any that are uncomfortable or don't fit.

建議: 回答中表达不清楚，尤其是价格范围和最后一句话的含义。建议明确价格范围并用正确的词汇描述鞋子的舒适度。

範例: I don't own many shoes, but I usually spend between 100 and 400 dollars on each pair. I choose shoes that are comfortable and good for my feet.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议简化句子，清晰表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are meant for walking. Although fashionable shoes can be expensive, they often have low quality and don't last long.

× So I don't really keen on, uh, pursuing shoes because I, I, I aware a pair of shoes for a very long time and I only wear sneakers because I have to run and, and my students, so I can just, uh, wear those fancy were deliberate shoes.

✓ So I don't really keen on, uh, buying shoes because I, I, I have a pair of shoes for a very long time and I only wear sneakers because I have to run and, and my students, so I can just, uh, wear those fancy deliberate shoes.

这里“keen on”后面应该接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事，所以“pursuing”应改为“buying”。另外，“aware”用法错误，应改为“have”，表示拥有。

× So I don't really keen on, uh, pursuing shoes because I, I, I aware a pair of shoes for a very long time and I only wear sneakers because I have to run and, and my students, so I can just, uh, wear those fancy were deliberate shoes.

✓ So I don't really keen on, uh, buying shoes because I, I, I have a pair of shoes for a very long time and I only wear sneakers because I have to run and, and my students, so I can just, uh, wear those fancy deliberate shoes.

“were deliberate shoes”中“were”用法错误，应为形容词“deliberate”修饰“shoes”，且“deliberate”可能是想表达“delicate”或“decorative”，此处保留原词但去掉“were”。

× Yes, definitely. I always bought shoes online uh, because it's very convenient and I can buy uh, very many shoes in the same time and I, I often buy home and try them out and then I can turn back some shoes that that is uncomfortable or is unfit.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always buy shoes online uh, because it's very convenient and I can buy uh, many shoes at the same time and I, I often buy them and try them out and then I can return some shoes that are uncomfortable or unfit.

“always bought”时态错误，表示习惯应使用一般现在时“always buy”。“very many”用法不当，应为“many”。“in the same time”应为“at the same time”。“buy home”应为“buy them”。“turn back”应为“return”。“that that is”应为“that are”。

× Yes, definitely. I always bought shoes online uh, because it's very convenient and I can buy uh, very many shoes in the same time and I, I often buy home and try them out and then I can turn back some shoes that that is uncomfortable or is unfit.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always buy shoes online uh, because it's very convenient and I can buy uh, many shoes at the same time and I, I often buy them and try them out and then I can return some shoes that are uncomfortable or unfit.

“in the same time”应改为“at the same time”，表示“同时”。

× I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in this, uh, prices. They can be comfortable and good for my food.

✓ I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in price. They can be comfortable and good for my feet.

“prices”应为单数“price”，因为这里指的是价格范围。“food”应为“feet”，表示“脚”，与鞋子相关。

× I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in this, uh, prices. They can be comfortable and good for my food.

✓ I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in price. They can be comfortable and good for my feet.

“good for my food”中“food”用错，应为“feet”，表示鞋子对脚的舒适性。

× I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in this, uh, prices. They can be comfortable and good for my food.

✓ I don't have many shoes, but each of them ranges from 100 to 200 to 400 in price. They can be comfortable and good for my feet.

“each of them”指代鞋子，使用正确，但后文“my food”应为“my feet”，是代词使用错误。

× I prefer comfortable shoes because shoes are used for walking, walk, but some fashionable shoes can have fancy deliberations that is often very very high price but but with the low quality and it can be used to it can last long so.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because shoes are used for walking, but some fashionable shoes can have fancy decorations that are often very expensive but of low quality and they cannot last long.

“walk”重复且用法错误，应去掉。 “deliberations”应为“decorations”，表示装饰。 “that is”应为“that are”，主谓一致。 “very very high price”应改为“very expensive”。“with the low quality”应为“of low quality”。“it can be used to it can last long”表达不清，应改为“they cannot last long”。