鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Umm, actually, I don't like buying shoes, but I like buying some clothes instead of buying shoes. Umm, because I'm not interested in like boots or sneakers. I uh, yeah.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
No, I don't have umm, boat shoes in online because umm, my size is bigger than uh, the average of women. So I have to check, uh, the size of shoes, uh, with fitting.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
In average I use on ¥5000 for buying shoes. It is good for me to pay and also I can't buy good one.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I prefer fashionable shoes because I like fashion and my clothes are usually fashionable so it might fit my clothes.
評估
總分
文法
× No, I don't have umm, boat shoes in online because umm, my size is bigger than uh, the average of women.
✓ No, I haven't bought umm, boat shoes online because umm, my size is bigger than uh, the average for women.
The phrase 'have boat shoes in online' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'bought ... online' to indicate purchasing via the internet. Also, 'have' is not appropriate here; 'haven't bought' fits the context of past experience. Additionally, 'the average of women' should be 'the average for women' to correctly express comparison.
× In average I use on ¥5000 for buying shoes.
✓ On average, I spend ¥5000 on buying shoes.
The phrase 'In average' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'On average'. Also, 'I use on ¥5000' is awkward; 'I spend ¥5000' is the correct collocation. The preposition 'on' should be placed before the amount, not after 'use'.
× It is good for me to pay and also I can't buy good one.
✓ It is a good amount for me to pay, and also I can't buy a good one.
The sentence lacks articles before 'good one'. 'Good one' should be preceded by 'a' to indicate a singular countable noun. Also, 'It is good for me to pay' is awkward; 'It is a good amount for me to pay' is clearer.
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