鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the question and focus on directly answering it. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love buying shoes and usually purchase about two pairs each month because I enjoy exploring different brands.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, explain your preference clearly with linking words.

範例: Yes, I often buy shoes online nowadays because there are many discounts available on shopping apps, so I prefer purchasing shoes this way.

建議: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your spending habits.

範例: I don't usually spend a lot on shoes; when I need to buy a pair, I typically spend between 2000 and 3000 rupees.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Use clear sentence structures and linking words to explain your preference based on different situations.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes for daily use, but when I attend parties, I choose fashionable shoes to match my outfit.

× Yes, I love to buy shoes of different brands to explore the brand and I often buy 2 pairs of shoes in a month.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes of different brands to explore the brand and I often buy 2 pairs of shoes in a month.

The phrase 'love to buy' is grammatically correct but 'love buying' is more natural and commonly used in English to express enjoyment of an activity. Using the gerund form 'buying' after 'love' is preferred here.

× Yes, I bought shoes online nowadays very frequent as I think there are a lot of discount which I, uh, take at that app, so I I prefer to bought shoes only.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online nowadays very frequently as I think there are a lot of discounts which I, uh, take on that app, so I prefer to buy shoes only.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'bought' and 'prefer to bought' when referring to a current habit. The present tense 'buy' and 'prefer to buy' should be used to indicate habitual actions. Also, 'very frequent' should be 'very frequently' (adverb form), and 'discount' should be plural 'discounts' to match 'a lot of'. The preposition 'at' should be 'on' when referring to an app.

× Yes, I bought shoes online nowadays very frequent as I think there are a lot of discount which I, uh, take at that app, so I I prefer to bought shoes only.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online nowadays very frequently as I think there are a lot of discounts which I, uh, take on that app, so I prefer to buy shoes only.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to using an app; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'take at that app' is unclear; it should be 'take advantage of' or 'use' the discounts on that app.

× whenever there was necessity to buy uh, I almost spend like uh 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

✓ whenever there is a necessity to buy, I almost spend like 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

The phrase 'whenever there was necessity' mixes past tense 'was' with present habitual action. Since the speaker is talking about a general habit, present tense 'is' should be used. Also, 'almost spend' should be 'usually spend' or 'almost always spend' for clarity.

× whenever there was necessity to buy uh, I almost spend like uh 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

✓ whenever there is a necessity to buy, I almost spend like 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

The phrase 'necessity to buy' is missing an article. It should be 'a necessity to buy' to be grammatically correct.

× I almost spend like uh 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

✓ I almost spend around 2000 to ₹3000 for one pair of shoes.

The word 'like' is incorrectly used here to indicate approximation. The correct preposition or adverb is 'around' or 'about' to express approximate amounts.

× It depends upon the scenario I think, because at all the places scheduled shoes are not workable as if I want to go for any party I will the fashionable clothes but for the daily routine I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ It depends on the situation, I think, because scheduled shoes are not suitable for all places. If I want to go to a party, I will wear fashionable clothes, but for the daily routine, I prefer comfortable shoes.

The original sentence has several issues: 'depends upon the scenario' is better as 'depends on the situation'; 'at all the places scheduled shoes are not workable' is awkward and unclear, better as 'scheduled shoes are not suitable for all places'; 'I will the fashionable clothes' is missing the verb 'wear'; and the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.