鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
For sure it's something uh, from the mainly thing in this life to buy shoes. Often I purchase shoes one per year or two per year maximum. One for the sport, another one for my work.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, indeed, it's once I I purchased one from online, but it was a very bad, uh, a very bad time to purchase one from online because the size is not matching to my feet. So it's I will not repeat it again.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Actually I'm not the one who paying too much and chooses or stylish in general. So I can say that maybe 200 to 300 real per year maximum.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I would say that I'm with the comfortable shoes. I don't like, uh, I don't really like to show myself from my shoes. So the comfortables will be, uh, suitable to me.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分數: 65.0建議: حاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جملًا كاملة وواضحة مع تفاصيل محددة لدعم إجابتك.
範例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy one or two pairs each year, one for sports and another for work. I find it important to have the right shoes for different activities.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分數: 60.0建議: حاول تحسين تدفق الكلام باستخدام روابط بين الجمل، وقلل من التكرار والتردد. قدم تفاصيل أكثر تحديدًا عن تجربتك لتجعل إجابتك أكثر تماسكًا.
範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but it was a bad experience because the size did not fit my feet. Therefore, I prefer not to buy shoes online again.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分數: 70.0建議: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر دقة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. قدم إجابة واضحة مع تفاصيل محددة عن المبلغ الذي تنفقه.
範例: I usually spend around 200 to 300 riyals per year on shoes because I prefer practical and affordable options rather than stylish ones.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分數: 65.0建議: حاول التعبير عن آرائك بشكل أكثر وضوحًا واستخدم جملًا مترابطة مع تجنب التردد. قدم أسبابًا واضحة لاختيارك.
範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I value comfort over fashion. I don't like to draw attention to my shoes, so comfort suits me better.
文法
× Often I purchase shoes one per year or two per year maximum.
✓ Often I purchase one pair of shoes per year or two pairs per year maximum.
The word 'shoes' is plural, so it should be quantified with 'pairs' when counting. Saying 'one shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; the singular is 'shoe'. Therefore, use 'one pair of shoes' or 'two pairs of shoes' to be grammatically correct.
× One for the sport, another one for my work.
✓ One for sport, another for my work.
The phrase 'the sport' is incorrect because 'sport' is an uncountable noun here and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'another one' is redundant after 'one'; 'another' alone suffices.
× Yes, indeed, it's once I I purchased one from online, but it was a very bad, uh, a very bad time to purchase one from online because the size is not matching to my feet.
✓ Yes, indeed, I once purchased one online, but it was a very bad experience because the size did not match my feet.
The phrase 'it's once I I purchased' is incorrect; 'I once purchased' is correct. Also, 'from online' should be 'online'. The verb tense should be consistent: 'did not match' instead of 'is not matching' because the event happened in the past.
× So it's I will not repeat it again.
✓ So I will not do it again.
The phrase 'it's I will not repeat it again' is ungrammatical and redundant. 'Repeat' already implies 'again', so 'repeat it again' is redundant. Also, 'it's I will not' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I will not do it again'.
× Actually I'm not the one who paying too much and chooses or stylish in general.
✓ Actually, I'm not the one who pays too much or chooses stylish shoes in general.
The verb 'paying' should be in the present simple form 'pays' to agree with the singular subject 'who'. Also, 'chooses or stylish' is incorrect; it should be 'chooses stylish shoes' or 'is stylish'. The sentence needs parallel structure and correct verb forms.
× So I can say that maybe 200 to 300 real per year maximum.
✓ So I can say that maybe 200 to 300 riyals per year maximum.
The currency 'real' should be pluralized as 'riyals' when referring to an amount greater than one. Also, the correct spelling is 'riyals' for the Saudi currency.
× I would say that I'm with the comfortable shoes.
✓ I would say that I prefer comfortable shoes.
The phrase 'I'm with the comfortable shoes' is unnatural and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I prefer comfortable shoes'. Also, 'comfortable' is an adjective modifying 'shoes'.
× I don't like, uh, I don't really like to show myself from my shoes.
✓ I don't really like to show off with my shoes.
The phrase 'show myself from my shoes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'show off with my shoes' or 'show myself through my shoes'. The pronoun and preposition usage is incorrect here.
× So the comfortables will be, uh, suitable to me.
✓ So comfortable shoes will be suitable for me.
'Comfortables' is not a correct plural noun. 'Comfortable' is an adjective and cannot be pluralized. The noun 'shoes' should be used. Also, 'suitable to me' should be 'suitable for me'.
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