鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tu respuesta es un poco larga y repetitiva. Intenta ser más claro y directo, usando oraciones más cortas y evitando redundancias. Además, sería útil usar conectores para mejorar la coherencia.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it often because of my budget. For example, I last bought shoes in 2023, but I would love to buy them more frequently if I could.

建議: Tu respuesta es clara pero podría ser más natural y fluida. Usa conectores para enlazar ideas y evita frases demasiado largas. También, intenta usar vocabulario más preciso.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but unfortunately it was a scam. Since then, I haven't bought shoes online again.

建議: Tu respuesta es confusa y tiene errores gramaticales. Debes estructurar mejor tus ideas, usar oraciones completas y vocabulario adecuado para expresar cantidades y experiencias.

範例: I usually don't spend much on shoes because I have other expenses. Normally, I spend around 200,000 Colombian pesos, which is my budget limit. For example, the last pair I bought was not very good quality.

建議: Tu respuesta es buena pero puede ser más natural y fluida. Usa conectores para mejorar la coherencia y evita repetir palabras innecesariamente.

範例: Since the pandemic, I prefer comfortable shoes. For instance, I used to wear high heels before, but I found them uncomfortable, so I stopped wearing them.

× I do like my shoes but I can't afford to do it as much as I would for example my last shoes I bought them in 2023 I believe, but I I would love to buy shoes more often.

✓ I do like my shoes but I can't afford to do it as much as I would. For example, my last pair of shoes I bought in 2023, I believe, but I would love to buy shoes more often.

The phrase 'my last shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and 'last' should be followed by a singular noun when referring to one item. The correct term is 'my last pair of shoes' to indicate a single set of shoes. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed punctuation for clarity.

× I have actually there is this anecdote where I bought a couple shoes online and it was a scam.

✓ I have actually, there is this anecdote where I bought a couple of shoes online and it was a scam.

The phrase 'a couple shoes' is missing the preposition 'of' which is necessary when using 'a couple' to indicate quantity. The correct phrase is 'a couple of shoes'.

× So normally I spend like 2-2 hundred Colombian pesos on shoes, that's my highest limit.

✓ So normally I spend around 200 Colombian pesos on shoes; that's my highest limit.

The phrase '2-2 hundred' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'around 200' to express an approximate amount. Also, the sentence needed punctuation to separate the two ideas clearly.

× And for example the last time the shoes are bad, they cost.

✓ And for example, the last time, the shoes were bad, but they cost a lot.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'The shoes are bad, they cost' lacks a proper verb tense and object. Changing 'are' to 'were' matches past tense, and adding 'but they cost a lot' completes the thought.