鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Use simple and correct sentences, avoid repetition and unclear words. For example, say how often you buy shoes and why you like or dislike it.

範例: I don't really enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy one pair a year from Adidas because I prefer quality over quantity.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Explain why you buy shoes online and mention specific reasons or experiences. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because I know my size and trust the brand. Also, online shopping is convenient and often offers good deals.

建議: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words. Specify approximate amounts and reasons for spending.

範例: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes, around two or three pairs a year. Comfort is very important to me, so I don't mind paying more for good quality.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain your preference with reasons and avoid unclear statements.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them all day. I think fashionable shoes are more popular among women than men.

× Actually no, because I see don't feel funny if I go to buy shoot.

✓ Actually no, because I don't feel comfortable if I go to buy shoes.

The sentence uses 'I see don't feel funny' which is incorrect pronoun and verb usage. It should be 'I don't feel comfortable' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Actually no, because I see don't feel funny if I go to buy shoot.

✓ Actually no, because I don't feel comfortable if I go to buy shoes.

The word 'shoot' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'shoes' when referring to more than one shoe.

× So I all year all all year I go to Adidas and buy one shoot to all year.

✓ So all year, I go to Adidas and buy one pair of shoes for the whole year.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. Adding 'all year' at the beginning and clarifying 'one pair of shoes for the whole year' improves clarity and grammar.

× So I all year all all year I go to Adidas and buy one shoot to all year.

✓ So all year, I go to Adidas and buy one pair of shoes for the whole year.

The word 'shoot' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes' or 'pair of shoes' to indicate plural.

× Yeah, I have bought a short online many times because I know my tying and have A1 brand comfortable with with it.

✓ Yeah, I have bought shoes online many times because I know my size and have a brand that is comfortable for me.

The sentence uses 'a short' instead of 'shoes', 'my tying' is incorrect and should be 'my size', and 'have A1 brand comfortable with with it' is unclear and needs correction for clarity.

× Yeah, I have bought a short online many times because I know my tying and have A1 brand comfortable with with it.

✓ Yeah, I have bought shoes online many times because I know my size and have a brand that is comfortable for me.

The word 'short' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes' to refer to footwear.

× So in many times when I get offered online, I bought them online.

✓ So many times when I find offers online, I buy them online.

The phrase 'in many times' is incorrect; it should be 'many times'. Also, 'get offered online' is unclear and better expressed as 'find offers online'.

× Actually a lot of because I want the should be comfortable, but I bought, I pay usually two or three in year, uh, and uh, don't change, uh, a lot because it could be, uh, the most important for me.

✓ Actually, a lot, because I want the shoes to be comfortable, but I usually buy two or three pairs a year, and I don't change them a lot because comfort is the most important for me.

The original sentence lacks quantifiers and proper structure. Adding 'a lot', 'two or three pairs a year', and clarifying the meaning improves grammar and clarity.

× Actually a lot of because I want the should be comfortable, but I bought, I pay usually two or three in year, uh, and uh, don't change, uh, a lot because it could be, uh, the most important for me.

✓ Actually, a lot, because I want the shoes to be comfortable, but I usually buy two or three pairs a year, and I don't change them a lot because comfort is the most important for me.

The phrase 'two or three in year' is incorrect; it should be 'two or three pairs a year' to indicate quantity and time correctly.

× Actually a lot of because I want the should be comfortable, but I bought, I pay usually two or three in year, uh, and uh, don't change, uh, a lot because it could be, uh, the most important for me.

✓ Actually, a lot, because I want the shoes to be comfortable, but I usually buy two or three pairs a year, and I don't change them a lot because comfort is the most important for me.

The sentence lacks proper pronouns like 'them' to refer back to 'shoes', which is necessary for clarity.

× Usually I prefer comfortable shoot, uh, because I want it in comfortable all today, all day.

✓ Usually I prefer comfortable shoes because I want them to be comfortable all day.

The word 'shoot' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. Also, 'all today' is incorrect and should be 'all day'.

× Usually I prefer comfortable shoot, uh, because I want it in comfortable all today, all day.

✓ Usually I prefer comfortable shoes because I want them to be comfortable all day.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' (plural); it should be 'them'.

× Uh, I feel the fashionable should it make uh be related by woman a lot of not men.

✓ I feel fashionable shoes are mostly preferred by women, not men.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect word order and forms. Correcting adjective use and sentence structure clarifies the meaning.