鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and unclear phrases. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially comfortable ones rather than heels or sandals. I usually purchase shoes once a year because I prefer investing in high-quality pairs that last a long time.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve fluency. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your hesitation about online shopping.

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I hesitate due to concerns about the size fitting properly and the uncertainty about the shoes' quality.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by reducing filler words and structuring your sentences clearly. Use linking words to explain your reasoning and be specific about your spending habits.

範例: I usually spend around $300 on shoes because I prefer high-quality products that last longer, so investing more money ensures their durability.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide reasons.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because comfort is my priority. Since I invest a lot in shoes, I believe they must be comfortable to justify the cost.

× I personally prefer shoes rather than heels and sandals like stuff.

✓ I personally prefer shoes to heels and sandals.

The phrase 'prefer ... rather than ...' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to'. So, 'prefer shoes to heels and sandals' is the correct form.

× I usually buy shoes once a year like I'm taking expensive ones so I can keep it.

✓ I usually buy shoes once a year, like expensive ones, so I can keep them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so it should be 'them'. Also, 'taking expensive ones' is awkward; 'like expensive ones' is clearer.

× No, I never bought shoes online because I feel hesitated to do online shopping.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I feel hesitant to do online shopping.

The present perfect tense 'have never bought' is appropriate for experiences up to now. Also, 'feel hesitated' is incorrect; the adjective 'hesitant' should be used after 'feel'.

× I realized that it is uh, not such a good thing to buy online because I feel like uh, this size will may change and the I don't know about the quality of the shoes.

✓ I realized that it is not such a good thing to buy online because I feel like the size may change and I don't know about the quality of the shoes.

The modal verbs 'will' and 'may' should not be used together; only one modal verb is needed. Also, 'the I' is a typo and should be 'and I'.

× I usually buy high quality, uh products, so it is obviously expensive, so it may be like $300 somewhere like that, so I can ensure the quality of the shoes by uh spending more money so I can keep that.

✓ I usually buy high-quality products, so they are obviously expensive, maybe around $300, so I can ensure the quality of the shoes by spending more money and keep them.

'High quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as an adjective. 'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'products'. 'So it may be like $300 somewhere like that' is awkward; 'maybe around $300' is clearer. 'Keep that' should be 'keep them' referring to shoes.

× I do prefer comfortable shoes because the comfort is first.

✓ I do prefer comfortable shoes because comfort comes first.

'The comfort is first' is awkward; the phrase 'comfort comes first' is a natural expression.

× It is very important to be comfortable rather than fashion it to me.

✓ It is very important to be comfortable rather than fashionable to me.

'Fashion' is a noun; the adjective 'fashionable' should be used here. Also, 'fashion it' is incorrect; the sentence compares 'comfortable' and 'fashionable'.

× So I believe because I am investing so much, I believe the comfort must.

✓ So I believe, because I am investing so much, that comfort is a must.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'that' and completing the thought with 'comfort is a must' makes it grammatically correct and clearer.