鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, что снижает его естественность. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать излишних повторов. Также стоит давать более конкретные ответы, например, указывать точную частоту покупок.

範例: I don't often buy shoes because I prefer buying clothes. However, I usually buy shoes about once a month.

建議: В ответе есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении, а также не хватает связующих слов для плавности речи. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и связки, чтобы сделать ответ более связным и понятным.

範例: I have never bought shoes online because I am really scared of it. Therefore, I prefer to go to the store to see and try the shoes before buying.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные формулировки и связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит уточнить, что значит "процент от стоимости".

範例: I usually spend less money when I buy shoes online. However, in stores, I tend to spend more because there are often discounts or sales.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ, использовать связующие слова и четко разделять предпочтения в зависимости от ситуации.

範例: I prefer fashionable shoes when I go to parties because they look nice, even if they are not very comfortable. However, for sports or school, I enjoy wearing comfortable shoes.

× I'm not a big fan of buying a shoes online or or in stores.

✓ I'm not a big fan of buying shoes online or in stores.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. 'A' is used only with singular countable nouns. Therefore, 'a shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I more prefer buy clothes.

✓ I prefer buying clothes more.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing general preferences. Also, the adverb 'more' should be placed after the verb phrase for clarity. Hence, 'I more prefer buy clothes' should be corrected to 'I prefer buying clothes more'.

× But I buy shoes like 1 on one of mouth maybe like that.

✓ But I buy shoes like once a month, maybe like that.

The phrase '1 on one of mouth' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'once a month'. This is a singular and plural issue related to quantifiers and time expressions.

× Now I never bought shoes online because I'm really scares about it.

✓ I have never bought shoes online because I'm really scared about it.

The present perfect tense 'have never bought' is appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'scares' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'scared'. This is a past tense issue and incorrect use of adjectives.

× I prefer go in to store and buying and see my new shoes and so.

✓ I prefer to go into the store, buy, and see my new shoes and so on.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to go' is used. Also, 'into' is one word, and the verbs should be parallel in form: 'go', 'buy', 'see'. This involves modal verb usage and preposition correction.

× If I buy shoes online I I spend not much money, but if I go to the store I will spend a lot of money because they have a percent of the cost of the shoes.

✓ If I buy shoes online, I don't spend much money, but if I go to the store, I will spend a lot of money because they add a percentage to the cost of the shoes.

In conditional sentences about general truths, the present simple is used in the 'if' clause and present simple or future in the main clause. 'I spend not much money' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't spend much money'. Also, 'have a percent' is incorrect; 'add a percentage' is better. This is a present tense issue and incorrect use of quantifiers.

× I prefer border if I go to the party or something like that I will prefer fashionable shoes like uh not comfortable or if I do sport or go to school I prefer and I enjoying wearing comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer formal shoes if I go to a party or something like that; I will prefer fashionable shoes, not comfortable ones. But if I do sports or go to school, I prefer and enjoy wearing comfortable shoes.

'Border' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'formal' or 'better'. Also, 'shoes like uh not comfortable' is unclear; it should be 'fashionable shoes, not comfortable ones'. 'Sport' should be plural 'sports'. 'I enjoying' should be 'I enjoy'. This involves singular/plural issues, verb form, and sentence structure errors.