鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, use 'all kinds of shoes' instead of 'all kind of shoes'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and I like all kinds, such as sports shoes, heels, trainers, flats, and loafers. I usually buy them whenever I feel the need or desire, without setting a specific schedule.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, say 'I deeply regret this decision' instead of 'I am deeply regret'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about your feelings and the consequences.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but unfortunately, it was a bad experience. The shoes I received were almost five sizes too big, and since I paid a lot of money, I was very upset and disappointed.

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'interesting fact about me buying shoes is' to 'an interesting fact about my shoe shopping is'.

範例: An interesting fact about my shoe shopping is that I don't usually pay for them myself because my grandmother, who lives abroad, buys them for me whenever I need or want something specific.

建議: Improve subject-verb agreement ('society nowadays is' instead of 'are') and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points clearly and provide a more structured answer.

範例: Fortunately, nowadays fashionable and comfortable shoes are made together, so I prefer both. Thanks to global options, I can find shoes that combine style and comfort with high quality.

× I love all kind of shoes.

✓ I love all kinds of shoes.

The phrase 'all kind of shoes' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. The correct phrase is 'all kinds of shoes.'

× I can get sport heels, trainers, flats, loafers and I don't set time for buying shoes.

✓ I can get sports heels, trainers, flats, loafers and I don't set time for buying shoes.

The word 'sport heels' should be 'sports heels' because 'sports' is the correct plural adjective form used to describe types of shoes related to sports.

× I just buy them whenever I feel like it and whenever I need it.

✓ I just buy them whenever I feel like it and whenever I need them.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun, but 'them' is needed here because 'shoes' is plural. So 'whenever I need them' is correct.

× Yes I did and I am deeply regret this decision because the shoes came and it was almost 5 size bigger than my shoe size and I paid huge money for that.

✓ Yes I did and I deeply regret this decision because the shoes came and they were almost 5 sizes bigger than my shoe size and I paid a huge amount of money for that.

The phrase 'I am deeply regret' is incorrect; it should be 'I deeply regret' (present tense). Also, 'it was almost 5 size bigger' should be 'they were almost 5 sizes bigger' because 'shoes' is plural and 'sizes' should be plural. 'Paid huge money' is better expressed as 'paid a huge amount of money.'

× the shoes came and it was almost 5 size bigger than my shoe size

✓ the shoes came and they were almost 5 sizes bigger than my shoe size

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'was' should be 'were'. Also, '5 size' should be '5 sizes' to indicate plural measurement.

× Interesting fact about me buying shoes is I am not actually paying for them because my grandmother lives abroad and whenever I need shoes or I want something specific I ask her to buy it for me so I don't have to pay any money.

✓ An interesting fact about me buying shoes is that I do not actually pay for them because my grandmother lives abroad and whenever I need shoes or want something specific, I ask her to buy it for me so I don't have to pay any money.

The phrase 'I am not actually paying' is better expressed as 'I do not actually pay' to indicate a habitual action. Also, adding 'that' after 'is' improves sentence clarity. Commas are added for better readability.

× Luckily, society nowadays are making fashionable and comfortable shoes at the same time, so you can have both style and be comfortable.

✓ Luckily, society nowadays is making fashionable and comfortable shoes at the same time, so you can have both style and be comfortable.

The noun 'society' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to maintain subject-verb agreement.