鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially football boots since I am a big fan of football. However, because they are quite expensive, I only buy them occasionally.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trở nên logic và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because football boots are expensive and usually sold on international websites like Adidas or Nike. Therefore, buying online is the most convenient option for me.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng.

範例: I don't buy football boots very often, but when I do, I usually spend a lot because they are luxury items and quite expensive.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể cho sự lựa chọn của bạn.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is the most important factor for me when choosing footwear. If shoes don't feel good, I can't wear them for long periods.

× Of course, you know, I'm a big fan of football, so the football boost is my favorite one seems to me and uh, because I it's very ex uh, expensive items, so I can frequently afford it. So I only buy.

✓ Of course, you know, I'm a big fan of football, so the football boots seem to me my favorite ones and, uh, because they are very expensive items, I cannot frequently afford them. So I only buy occasionally.

The original sentence misuses 'seems' which should be 'seem' to agree with the plural subject 'boots'. Also, 'I it's' is incorrect; it should be 'they are' to refer to 'boots'. The phrase 'can frequently afford it' is incorrect because 'it' refers to plural 'items'; it should be 'cannot frequently afford them'. The sentence structure is also confusing and needs clarity.

× Yeah, of course you know that the footballs boost is really expensive and always sell on international websites like Adidas or Nike.

✓ Yeah, of course you know that football boots are really expensive and are always sold on international websites like Adidas or Nike.

The phrase 'footballs boost' is incorrect; it should be 'football boots' (plural). Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. 'Always sell' should be 'are always sold' to correctly use passive voice for the items being sold.

× So that's the only way to buy that is, uh, buying online.

✓ So the only way to buy them is, uh, by buying online.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct preposition usage. 'Buying online' should be preceded by 'by' to indicate the method. Also, 'that' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'boots'.

× Well, as I said, I'm not is I'm not frequently, I'm not too frequently by those boost, but because it's a luxury items I think and that's a lot of money I spent on it because it's cost a lot.

✓ Well, as I said, I don't frequently buy those boots, but because they are luxury items, I think I spend a lot of money on them because they cost a lot.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'I'm not is I'm not frequently' is incorrect and should be 'I don't frequently'. 'By' should be 'buy'. 'Boost' should be plural 'boots'. 'It's a luxury items' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'they are luxury items'. 'That's a lot of money I spent' should be 'I spend a lot of money'. 'It's cost a lot' should be 'they cost a lot'.

× Well, as, uh, for me, I, I would choose the one that comfortable because the first one is the feelings.

✓ Well, as for me, I would choose the one that is comfortable because comfort is the most important feeling for me.

The phrase 'the one that comfortable' is missing the verb 'is'. 'The first one is the feelings' is unclear and incorrect; it should express that comfort is the priority or feeling considered.

× The feeling is uh, my top notch when I choose, uh, shoes.

✓ Comfort is, uh, my top priority when I choose shoes.

'The feeling is my top notch' is incorrect usage; 'top notch' is an adjective meaning excellent, not a noun. The sentence should express that comfort is the top priority or most important factor.

× So I would go for the comfortable one.

✓ So I would go for the comfortable ones.

Since 'shoes' is plural, referring to 'one' is inconsistent. It should be 'ones' to match the plural noun.