鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且信息不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

範例: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have enough. I used to buy about two pairs a year, but now I try to avoid buying new shoes to protect the environment.

建議: 回答中时态和表达不准确，句子结构不够连贯。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达购买经历，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Last year, I purchased a comfortable pair from a Chinese website. I find online shopping very convenient for buying clothes and shoes.

建議: 回答内容不够相关且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议直接回答花费金额，并简要说明原因，避免无关信息。

範例: I usually spend less than 100 yuan on shoes because I have other important expenses. Also, I try to buy less to help the environment.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和词汇使用有待提高。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词增强句子连贯性。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me feel relaxed and work easily. However, fashionable shoes also have advantages, such as looking more attractive and stylish.

× Not rolling.

✓ Not really.

这里学生想表达“不是很喜欢”，应使用副词'really'而不是动词'rolling'。这是词汇使用错误，不属于语法问题，但为了表达清晰，需改正。

× I used to buy shoes on one year and like 2 shoes

✓ I used to buy shoes once a year, about 2 pairs.

表达频率时应使用once a year而不是on one year，且鞋子应使用复数形式pairs。这里涉及时间表达和复数形式。

× but now I'm will not buy new shoes for the environment.

✓ but now I will not buy new shoes for the environment.

'I'm will'是错误的助动词搭配，正确用法是'I will'表示将来时。

× And I last year I buy one pair of shoes online in Chinese on Chinese Internet.

✓ And last year I bought one pair of shoes online on Chinese Internet.

描述过去发生的动作应使用过去式'bought'，'buy'是现在时。

× online in Chinese on Chinese Internet.

✓ online on Chinese Internet.

'in Chinese'在此处多余且不合适，正确表达是'on Chinese Internet'。

× I usually spend less than CN¥100 on Tuesdays because I have another important things to buy,

✓ I usually spend less than CN¥100 on shoes because I have other important things to buy,

'on Tuesdays'不合适，应该说明花钱的对象；'another important things'中'another'用于单数，'things'是复数，应改为'other important things'。

× I have another important things to buy,

✓ I have other important things to buy,

'another'用于单数名词，'things'是复数，应使用'other'。

× so I will not spend much on associates and clothes and I think it's only very good for the environment.

✓ so I will not spend much on accessories and clothes, and I think it's very good for the environment.

'associates'应为'accessories'，且句子中逗号使用不当，需分开两个并列句。

× it make me feel more relaxed and easy to work.

✓ it makes me feel more relaxed and makes it easier to work.

主语it为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s；'easy to work'应改为'it easier to work'以表达更自然的意思。

× But fashion shoes has also some advantages like it's more beautiful or more, uh, fashionable.

✓ But fashion shoes also have some advantages like they're more beautiful or more, uh, fashionable.

'fashion shoes'为复数，谓语动词应使用'have'，代词应使用'they're'。