鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和不连贯的表达，同时注意句子结构的完整性。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes because they help me change my style and boost my confidence. I usually buy shoes about four times a year, mostly when my old ones are worn out. Getting new shoes always makes me feel great.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子连贯性，避免出现无关的词汇。可以使用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because I am very busy and it saves a lot of time and energy. Also, online shopping offers a wide variety of choices, making it easier and more convenient. However, I sometimes go to the store if I need to try the shoes before buying.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑性，避免使用不明确的词汇。可以具体说明价格范围和购买鞋子的理由。

範例: I usually spend about CN¥500 to CN¥800 on a pair of shoes. I think this price range is enough to buy good quality shoes with a nice design. For example, last year I bought a pair of soft shoes that were quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构和词汇的准确使用，避免出现无关或不连贯的内容。可以明确表达对时尚鞋和舒适鞋的偏好及原因。

範例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I am interested in fashion. I like to match my shoes with my clothes to create a stylish look. Although comfortable shoes are important, I enjoy wearing fashionable shoes more because they make me feel confident and happy.

× I don't buy thing it will offer.

✓ I don't buy things it will offer.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为表示不买多样的东西。

× Maybe around four time a year, usually one mile or the one we're old.

✓ Maybe around four times a year, usually one mile or the one we're old.

time应使用复数times，表示次数。

× Maybe around four time a year, usually one mile or the one we're old.

✓ Maybe around four times a year, usually one mile or the one we're old.

mile应为miles，表示距离的复数。

× Maybe around four time a year, usually one mile or the one we're old.

✓ Maybe around four times a year, usually one mile or the ones we're old.

句子结构混乱，'the one we're old'不通顺，应改为'the ones we're old'表示旧的鞋子。

× Umm. It's always feel great to get new shoes.

✓ Umm. It always feels great to get new shoes.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词feel应加s变为feels。

× Yes I do, I like buying shoes online because I'm very busy and it's save a lot of time and energy there.

✓ Yes I do, I like buying shoes online because I'm very busy and it saves a lot of time and energy.

这里不是情态动词错误，而是第三人称单数动词形式错误，save应为saves。

× Also meets my choice online which makes shopping easier and convenient.

✓ Also meets my choice online, which makes shopping easier and more convenient.

缺少逗号分隔定语从句，且convenient前应加more，表示比较级。

× But sometimes I still go to the store if I really need to try them. When?

✓ But sometimes I still go to the store if I really need to try them on.

try后应加介词on，表示试穿。

× I usually spend about CN¥500 or CN¥800 or a pair of shoes.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥500 or CN¥800 on a pair of shoes.

介词使用错误，应该用on表示花费在某物上。

× I usually spend about CN¥500 or CN¥800 or a pair of shoes.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥500 or CN¥800 on a pair of shoes.

这里介词用错，应该用on表示花费在鞋子上。

× I remember a pile of soft shoes last year which was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

✓ I remember a pair of soft shoes last year which was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

pile用法不当，鞋子通常用pair表示一双。

× I really.

✓ I really do.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词do。

× I like to share my old style with my clothes for and uniform design.

✓ I like to share my own style with my clothes and uniform design.

原句中for and不合适，且表达不清，改为and连接衣服和制服设计。

× Comfortable shoes are OK, but I enjoy the trained shoes more.

✓ Comfortable shoes are OK, but I enjoy the trendy shoes more.

trained shoes用词错误，应为trendy表示时尚的。

× Will they make me feel confident and happy?

✓ They make me feel confident and happy.

此句为陈述句，不应用疑问句形式。