鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'I literally have the opposition to buying shoes.' Instead, express your opinion naturally and clearly, and mention how often you buy shoes. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have many pairs. However, I usually buy new shoes once or twice a year when I need them.

建議: Focus on giving a clear and coherent answer. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your process of buying shoes online, such as comparing prices. Try to use relevant vocabulary and keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Usually, I compare prices on different websites before making a decision to ensure I get a good deal.

建議: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Instead of 'the price of our my shoes frequented,' say 'I usually spend between $50 and $100 on shoes.' This will make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I usually spend between $50 and $100 when I buy shoes, depending on the brand and quality.

建議: Provide a clear preference and explain your reasoning with specific examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion. For example, I wear comfortable shoes when I go to work, but I choose fashionable ones for special events.

× I literally have the opposition to buying uh, shoes.

✓ I literally oppose buying shoes.

The phrase 'have the opposition to' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'oppose' when expressing disagreement or dislike. Using 'oppose' directly with the verb 'buying' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I have a lot of shoes and uh, when I just want to do what myself, I just go to, uh, paying new shoes.

✓ I have a lot of shoes, and when I want to treat myself, I just go to buy new shoes.

The phrase 'do what myself' is unclear and incorrect. The correct expression is 'treat myself' to indicate doing something enjoyable for oneself. Also, 'go to paying new shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'go to buy new shoes' because 'go to' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× Yeah, like I talked before, sometimes I just when I make a decision for a specific shoes and will within when I compare the price on shopping or in alliance.

✓ Yeah, like I said before, sometimes when I decide on specific shoes, I compare prices online or in stores.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Like I talked before' should be 'like I said before'. 'Make a decision for a specific shoes' should be 'decide on specific shoes' (note plural 'shoes'). 'Will within when I compare' is incorrect and removed for clarity. 'On shopping or in alliance' is unclear; corrected to 'online or in stores' to make sense.

× Usually the price of our my shoes frequented between $50.00 to $100.

✓ Usually, the price of my shoes ranges between $50 and $100.

The phrase 'our my shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'my shoes'. 'Frequented between' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'ranges between'. Also, 'between $50.00 to $100' should be 'between $50 and $100' for proper preposition use.

× I prefer both of them, I just think that it's the one on the occasion or and the the place I had to go to or like for example if I just going to work I should wear some something.

✓ I prefer both of them. I just think it depends on the occasion and the place I have to go to. For example, if I am going to work, I should wear something comfortable.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'it's the one on the occasion or and the the place' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'it depends on the occasion and the place'. 'I had to go to' should be 'I have to go to' to match present tense. 'If I just going to work' should be 'if I am going to work' for correct verb form. 'I should wear some something' is incorrect; corrected to 'I should wear something comfortable' for clarity.