鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用更简单且正确的句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes only when my old ones are worn out or broken.

建議: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am worried about their quality. It is hard to be sure if the shoes are good without trying them on first.

建議: 回答中数字表达不准确，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用正确的数字表达和更自然的词汇，同时补充具体原因。

範例: I usually spend between 500 and 2000 yuan on shoes. I prefer affordable but good quality shoes for my daily use.

建議: 回答表达较为清晰，但语法和用词有待改进。建议用更准确的语法和词汇表达观点，并适当使用连接词。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because shoes are mainly for daily use, not for showing off. Also, fashionable shoes are often just a marketing strategy to attract buyers.

× Yes I'd like but doesn't mean I like buying shoes very frequent.

✓ Yes, I'd like to, but that doesn't mean I like buying shoes very frequently.

这里缺少了不定式to，且副词频率应使用副词形式frequently，而不是形容词frequent。

× I mean is I'd like buy shoes when the shirt is broken or useless.

✓ I mean I'd like to buy shoes when the shoes are broken or useless.

动词like后面应接不定式to buy，而不是直接动词原形buy；另外，句中shirt应为shoes，且主语和谓语需保持一致。

× Never. I didn't buy any shoes on the Internet because they have a major problem is you can't insure the qualifications of that shoes because when you buy a shoe that is not should use then you can't or you hardly find.

✓ Never. I haven't bought any shoes on the Internet because there is a major problem: you can't ensure the quality of those shoes. When you buy shoes that shouldn't be used, you can't or can hardly find out.

时态应使用现在完成时haven't bought表示过去到现在的经历；there is结构更合适表达存在问题；ensure表示确保，qualifications用词不当，应为quality；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× I would say the minimum is 500, the maximum is 2000s because I wouldn't choose too expensive shoes for my daily routines.

✓ I would say the minimum is 500, the maximum is 2000 because I wouldn't choose shoes that are too expensive for my daily routine.

数字2000后不加复数s；daily routines应为daily routine，routine为单数；too expensive前应加that are修饰shoes。

× I only choose a more cheapest but valuable for my daily commuting.

✓ I only choose cheaper but valuable shoes for my daily commuting.

more cheapest是错误的比较级表达，cheap的比较级是cheaper，不需要more；缺少名词shoes。

× I would prefer suitable shoes rather than famous shoes because I think shoes is mainly for our daily commuting, it's not for the show.

✓ I would prefer suitable shoes rather than famous shoes because I think shoes are mainly for our daily commuting, not for show.

shoes为复数，谓语动词应使用are而不是is；for the show中the不必要，改为for show更自然。

× Also, I think the purpose of selling fashionable shoes is just attracting people to buy their shoes.

✓ Also, I think the purpose of selling fashionable shoes is just to attract people to buy them.

动词不定式to attract更合适；their shoes指代不明，改为them更清晰。

× It didn't have any advantage to.

✓ It doesn't have any advantage.

时态应与上下文一致使用现在时；句子结构不完整，去掉to使句子完整。