鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I was students”应为“when I was a student”。建议使用更简洁且语法正确的句子，并且避免重复表达。可以先直接回答问题，再补充原因和频率。

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes. When I was a student, I bought shoes about once or twice a month because we wore uniforms and I wanted to have different styles from others.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“there is a wide variety of style I can choose them”应改为“there is a wide variety of styles to choose from”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because there is a wide variety of styles to choose from, and it is more convenient than going to a physical store.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，再说明原因，注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

範例: I usually spend around $100 on shoes because I prefer high-quality and comfortable ones, which tend to be more expensive.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“it can help me work or stand for long term”应改为“they help me work or stand for a long time”。建议使用更自然的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me work or stand for a long time. After comfort, I choose fashionable shoes, but I don't usually follow the latest trends.

× When I was students, I really like buying shoes because we have uniform so I can buy some different shoes with others about buying shoes about one or twice a month.

✓ When I was a student, I really liked buying shoes because we have uniforms, so I could buy some different shoes from others, buying shoes about once or twice a month.

“students”应为单数“student”，因为主语是单数；“like”应改为过去式“liked”，与时间状语“when I was”一致；“uniform”应为复数“uniforms”，表示多套制服；“can”应改为过去式“could”；“with others”应改为“from others”，表示从别人那里买鞋；“about one or twice a month”应改为“about once or twice a month”，表达次数的正确用法。

× Yes, I bought the shoes online because there is a wide variety of style I can choose them and it also more convenient than go to shop to buy them.

✓ Yes, I bought the shoes online because there was a wide variety of styles I could choose from, and it was also more convenient than going to the shop to buy them.

句子描述过去发生的事情，谓语动词应使用过去时态，如“is”改为“was”，“can”改为“could”，“more convenient”前需加“was”；“style”应为复数“styles”；“go to shop”应改为动名词形式“going to the shop”。

× Yes, I bought the shoes online because there is a wide variety of style I can choose them and it also more convenient than go to shop to buy them.

✓ Yes, I bought the shoes online because there was a wide variety of styles I could choose from, and it was also more convenient than going to the shop to buy them.

“style”应为复数“styles”，因为“a wide variety of”后面通常接复数名词。

× Yes, I bought the shoes online because there is a wide variety of style I can choose them and it also more convenient than go to shop to buy them.

✓ Yes, I bought the shoes online because there was a wide variety of styles I could choose from, and it was also more convenient than going to the shop to buy them.

“choose”后面需要介词“from”表示选择的范围；“go to shop”应改为“going to the shop”，动名词形式作比较对象。

× I don't remember it very clearly but the cost around the $100 because I pay for high quality and comfortable shoes. They must all expensive.

✓ I don't remember it very clearly, but the cost is around $100 because I pay for high-quality and comfortable shoes. They must all be expensive.

“cost”作为主语，谓语应为“is”；“high quality”应用连字符“high-quality”作形容词；“must all expensive”缺少动词，应为“must all be expensive”。

× I don't remember it very clearly but the cost around the $100 because I pay for high quality and comfortable shoes. They must all expensive.

✓ I don't remember it very clearly, but the cost is around $100 because I pay for high-quality and comfortable shoes. They must all be expensive.

“the $100”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“must all expensive”缺少动词“be”，导致表达不完整。

× Umm I prefer comfortable shoes because it can help me work or stand for long term. Hmm after comfortable I choice fashionable because I won't follow the fashion.

✓ Umm, I prefer comfortable shoes because they can help me work or stand for a long time. Hmm, after comfortable, I choose fashionable because I don't follow fashion.

“comfortable shoes”是复数，代词应为“they”而非“it”；“stand for long term”应改为“stand for a long time”；“I choice”应为“I choose”，动词形式错误；“won't follow the fashion”应改为“don't follow fashion”，表达习惯用法。

× Umm I prefer comfortable shoes because it can help me work or stand for long term. Hmm after comfortable I choice fashionable because I won't follow the fashion.

✓ Umm, I prefer comfortable shoes because they can help me work or stand for a long time. Hmm, after comfortable, I choose fashionable because I don't follow fashion.

“choice”是名词，句中应使用动词“choose”；“won't follow”表达习惯上用一般现在时“don't follow”，因为是习惯性动作。