鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and correct minor grammar mistakes, such as 'enjoy buy shoes' should be 'enjoy buying shoes'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love buying shoes because they can change my outfit and improve my image. I usually buy new shoes every season to keep up with fashion trends, and I enjoy shopping for them online because it's convenient.

建議: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' to make your speech more fluent. Also, use linking words to organise your answer logically. For example, explain the convenience first, then mention reading reviews as an additional benefit. Be more specific about what you check in reviews.

範例: Yes, I love buying shoes online because there are many shops to choose from, so I can browse different styles quickly. Moreover, I can read customer reviews to ensure the shoes are comfortable and of good quality.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and correct grammar errors, such as 'a still student' should be 'still a student'. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

範例: I don't spend much on shoes because I'm still a student and can't afford expensive ones. Therefore, I usually choose brands that offer good quality at reasonable prices.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains many filler words. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid repetition. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly. For example, explain your preference for comfortable shoes in daily life and fashionable shoes for special occasions.

範例: It depends on the situation. For work or school, I prefer comfortable and good quality shoes to stay productive throughout the day. However, for special occasions like parties or meetings, I choose fashionable shoes to make a good impression.

× And I buy shoes every season to keep up with the fashion trend and I enjoy buy shoes online.

✓ And I buy shoes every season to keep up with the fashion trend and I enjoy buying shoes online.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'buy' should be corrected to 'buying'. This is a common rule in English where certain verbs are followed by gerunds.

× I can browse different style, different type of shoes within like 10 minutes and it is so convenient

✓ I can browse different styles, different types of shoes within like 10 minutes and it is so convenient

The nouns 'style' and 'type' should be plural ('styles' and 'types') because the speaker refers to multiple varieties. Using singular forms here is incorrect when talking about more than one.

× I prefer some good brand that UMM offer good quality shoes at the same time offer reasonable price.

✓ I prefer some good brands that offer good quality shoes and at the same time offer reasonable prices.

The preposition 'that' should be followed by plural 'brands' to match the plural verb 'offer'. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' to agree with 'shoes'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× I prefer some comfortable, comfortable and good quality shoes umm, to make sure I have a productive day I won't feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer comfortable and good quality shoes to make sure I have a productive day and won't feel uncomfortable.

The repetition of 'comfortable' is unnecessary and awkward. Also, the sentence is improved by removing filler words and adding 'and' to connect clauses properly for clarity.