鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but sounds unnatural and incomplete. Try to use a more natural expression for frequency, such as "every six months" or "twice a year." Also, avoid redundancy and make your answer more concise.

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, and I usually buy new ones every six months.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Use linking words like "because" instead of informal "'cause." Also, clarify your opinion and avoid vague phrases like "maybe I never repeat the same thing." Try to express your experience more clearly and naturally.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I don't think it's a good idea because I can't check the size or color properly, so I probably won't do it again.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "our shoes" should be "shoes." Use linking words like "because" to explain your reasons more smoothly. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

範例: I usually spend around ¥10,000 on shoes because I think cheaper ones have poor quality, and more expensive ones are too costly for me.

建議: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear parts. For example, "comfortable shirt" should be "comfortable shoes." Avoid repetition and use linking words like "although" to connect ideas. Also, try to express your preference clearly and logically.

範例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I like walking. Although fashionable shoes may look good, comfort is more important to me.

× I buy them half a year.

✓ I buy them every six months.

The original sentence 'I buy them half a year' is incorrect because it lacks a proper time expression. In English, to express frequency over a period, we use 'every' plus a time period, such as 'every six months'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses the correct present tense expression for habitual actions.

× I didn't think it's a good 'cause I couldn't check my size and also I couldn't check its color and so I maybe I never repeat the same thing.

✓ I didn't think it was good because I couldn't check my size or its color, so I probably won't repeat the same thing.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect conjunction usage ('cause' should be 'because'), tense inconsistency ('didn't think it's' should be 'didn't think it was'), and awkward phrasing ('maybe I never repeat' should be 'probably won't repeat'). The correction fixes these by using proper conjunctions, matching past tense, and clearer modal verb usage.

× Normally I buy our shoes costing around ¥10,000, less than that I think the quality is not so good and more than that it's too expensive for me.

✓ Normally I buy shoes costing around ¥10,000; less than that, I think the quality is not so good, and more than that, it's too expensive for me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'our shoes' instead of 'shoes'. 'Our' is a possessive pronoun that does not fit here. Removing 'our' corrects the pronoun usage. Also, adding punctuation improves clarity.

× I definitely prefer a comfortable shirt because I like walking and if if the design.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I like walking and the design matters too.

The original sentence mistakenly says 'comfortable shirt' instead of 'comfortable shoes', which is contextually incorrect. Also, the phrase 'if if the design' is unclear and likely a mistake. The correction replaces 'shirt' with 'shoes' and clarifies the intended meaning about design.

× Even though the design is good, sometimes the comfortability is not so good so I prioritize the how comfortable that shoes is.

✓ Even though the design is good, sometimes the comfort is not so good, so I prioritize how comfortable the shoes are.

The word 'comfortability' is not standard English; 'comfort' is the correct noun. Also, 'that shoes is' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and requires 'are'. The correction fixes these adjective and subject-verb agreement issues.