鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변에서 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'buying shoe'는 'buying shoes'로, 'usually wearing'은 'usually wear'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 'all my office'는 'all my outfits'로 바꾸는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I don't buy shoes very often because I usually wear the same comfortable pair. They match well with all my outfits, so I don't feel the need to buy new ones frequently. However, if I find a really good deal or a unique design, I might buy shoes once or twice a year.

建議: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의가 필요합니다. 'I have all shoe online before'는 'I have bought shoes online before'로 수정해야 하며, 'mature with'는 'match with'가 적절합니다. 또한, 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 하기 위해 접속사를 활용하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. Last year, during Black Friday, I purchased a pair of pink Adidas Samba shoes. They are very comfortable and match well with almost all my outfits, so I wear them often.

建議: 문법과 어휘 선택에 많은 오류가 있습니다. 'comfort'는 형용사 'comfortable'로, 'crooks'는 아마도 'Crocs'를 의미하는 것 같은데 정확한 브랜드명과 철자를 사용해야 합니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I usually don't spend more than $60 on shoes because I prefer buying simple and comfortable ones. For example, I often wear Crocs because they are very cozy and have a good design that matches my style.

建議: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 'I prepared to comfortable shoes'는 'I definitely prefer comfortable shoes'로 수정해야 하며, 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 적절히 사용해야 합니다. 경험을 더 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes. For example, I once bought a new pair of heels because they looked very pretty, but when I wore them, I felt very uncomfortable, so I gave them to my mom.

× I don't like buying shoe very often because I usually wearing the same comfortable pair.

✓ I don't like buying shoes very often because I usually wear the same comfortable pair.

The verb 'wearing' is incorrectly used here; after 'usually', the base form of the verb 'wear' should be used to indicate habitual action. Also, 'shoe' should be plural as it refers to shoes in general.

× I don't like buying shoe very often because I usually wearing the same comfortable pair.

✓ I don't like buying shoes very often because I usually wear the same comfortable pair.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items in general.

× They match well with all my office so I don't feel need to buy new ones frequently.

✓ They match well with all my office clothes so I don't feel the need to buy new ones frequently.

The phrase 'all my office' is incomplete; it should be 'all my office clothes' or 'all my office outfits'. Also, 'feel need' is missing the article 'the' before 'need'.

× However, if I find a really good deal or unique design, I might buy shoe once or twice.

✓ However, if I find a really good deal or unique design, I might buy shoes once or twice.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items in general.

× Yes, I have all shoe online before.

✓ Yes, I have bought all shoes online before.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the sentence is missing the past participle verb 'bought' to complete the present perfect tense.

× Yes, I have all shoe online before.

✓ Yes, I have bought all shoes online before.

The verb 'have' in present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'bought' to indicate completed action.

× They are very comfortable and mature with almost all my outfits, so I wear them often.

✓ They are very comfortable and match with almost all my outfits, so I wear them often.

The word 'mature' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'match'. 'Match with' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I usually don't spend more than $60.00 shoes because I prefer buying simple and comfort ones.

✓ I usually don't spend more than $60.00 on shoes because I prefer buying simple and comfortable ones.

The phrase 'more than $60.00 shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'more than $60.00 on shoes'. Also, 'comfort' should be the adjective 'comfortable'.

× I usually don't spend more than $60.00 shoes because I prefer buying simple and comfort ones.

✓ I usually don't spend more than $60.00 on shoes because I prefer buying simple and comfortable ones.

'Comfort' is a noun, but here an adjective 'comfortable' is needed to describe 'ones'.

× Uh, for example I wear I usually wearing crooks because it is very cozy and well matched design also.

✓ Uh, for example, I usually wear Crocs because they are very cozy and have a well-matched design.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect verb forms ('I wear I usually wearing'). Also, 'Crocs' is a brand name and should be capitalized. 'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'Crocs'. The phrase 'well matched design also' is awkward and corrected to 'have a well-matched design'.

× Definitely I prepared to comfortable shoes umm.

✓ Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes, umm.

The verb 'prepared' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'to comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'comfortable shoes' is the object without 'to'.

× For example I bought a new heel because it looks very pretty but when I wear it I feel very uncomfortable so I give them to my mom.

✓ For example, I bought new heels because they looked very pretty, but when I wore them, I felt very uncomfortable, so I gave them to my mom.

The sentence mixes present and past tense. Since the action happened in the past, all verbs should be in past tense: 'bought', 'looked', 'wore', 'felt', 'gave'. Also, 'heel' should be plural 'heels' as shoes have two heels, and pronouns should agree in number.