鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and 'mmm' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, say 'every girl loves' instead of 'every girl love'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I do like buying shoes. I usually buy them once or twice a year because it depends on how long my previous pairs last. Moreover, I love new designs and fashionable shoes.

建議: Reduce the use of filler words like 'uh' to improve fluency. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'but' to connect contrasting ideas clearly. Also, be more specific about the experience to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, I bought a pair of shoes online last year. They looked beautiful, but unfortunately, the size was not perfect. Therefore, I now prefer to try shoes in person before buying.

建議: Avoid vague expressions like 'I don't know really' and be more precise. Also, clarify the currency to avoid confusion. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and correct grammar, for example, 'amount to spend' instead of 'amount for spend'.

範例: I usually spend about 10 million Vietnamese Dong per year on shoes because I buy them once or twice annually. This amount seems reasonable to me.

建議: Avoid starting sentences with 'And'. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural by removing redundancy.

範例: Both fashionable and comfortable shoes are interesting, but I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk long distances. Therefore, I usually buy sneakers instead of high heels.

× I think every girl in the world, uh, love buying shoes.

✓ I think every girl in the world, uh, loves buying shoes.

The subject 'every girl' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'loves' instead of 'love'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule for singular subjects.

× it really depends on how long my previous pairs lasts.

✓ it really depends on how long my previous pairs last.

The subject 'pairs' is plural, so the verb should be 'last' instead of 'lasts'. The verb must agree in number with the plural subject.

× I usually am walking long distances and I want a pair of shoes that are more comfortable to walk.

✓ I usually walk long distances and I want a pair of shoes that is more comfortable to walk in.

The phrase 'usually am walking' is incorrect for habitual actions; simple present 'usually walk' is appropriate. Also, 'a pair of shoes' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Additionally, 'comfortable to walk' should be 'comfortable to walk in' to use the correct preposition.

× I want a pair of shoes that are more comfortable to walk.

✓ I want a pair of shoes that is more comfortable to walk in.

The verb should be 'is' because 'a pair' is singular. Also, the phrase 'comfortable to walk' is incomplete; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate wearing shoes while walking.