鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
How often? Well, to tell the truth, I'm not actually been a fan of going shopping, so I don't really often buy any shoes. I don't usually when it's, uh, really essential, uh, when it's really need to be and when I have my previous shoes broken or so on.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, of course. It's quite an open thing when people in my country buy shoes online. We have some big online markets where you can order whatever you want and any type of shoes, trainers, special boots for going in mountains and so on.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Well, I guess nearly 5000 of rubles. It's actually depends because umm, winter shoes usually require a higher price. They require more money, and uh, some summer shoes are less expensive.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Well, it really depends on the situation because, uh, when you go for, uh, you know, for traveling, you of course need a comfortable shoes, but however, if you go on some special party, then you will definitely need, uh, fashion one and maybe, uh, some special automatic and uh, it will depend.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分數: 60.0建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I'm not actually been' and 'I don't usually when it's'. Try to use correct verb forms and structure your answer more clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so on'. Aim to give a direct response followed by a clear explanation using linking words for coherence.
範例: I don't often buy shoes because I'm not a big fan of shopping. However, I usually purchase new shoes only when my old ones are worn out or broken.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid vague phrases like 'quite an open thing' and 'and so on'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.
範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. In my country, many people shop this way because there are large online marketplaces offering a wide variety of shoes, such as trainers and hiking boots.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分數: 65.0建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and filler words that affect clarity. Use correct sentence structures and avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, try to link your ideas logically and be more precise with your vocabulary.
範例: I usually spend about 5000 rubles on shoes. This amount varies because winter shoes tend to be more expensive than summer ones due to their materials and design.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分數: 55.0建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words, which reduce its effectiveness. Try to organise your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'however' and 'for example'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some special automatic'.
範例: I prefer comfortable shoes for activities like travelling because they provide support. However, for special occasions such as parties, I choose fashionable shoes to match the outfit.
文法
× I'm not actually been a fan of going shopping
✓ I'm not actually a fan of going shopping
The sentence incorrectly uses 'been' with the present tense 'I'm'. The correct form is 'I'm not actually a fan', using the simple present tense to express a current state.
× I don't usually when it's, uh, really essential
✓ I don't usually buy shoes unless it's really essential
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'usually'. Adding 'buy shoes unless' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× when it's really need to be
✓ when it's really needed
The phrase 'it's really need to be' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it's really needed' to express necessity in the present tense.
× when I have my previous shoes broken or so on
✓ when my previous shoes are broken or so on
The phrase 'have my previous shoes broken' is awkward. Using 'my previous shoes are broken' correctly uses plural agreement and passive voice to describe the condition.
× It's quite an open thing when people in my country buy shoes online
✓ It's quite common for people in my country to buy shoes online
The phrase 'an open thing' is incorrect. 'Quite common' is the appropriate expression to describe a frequent activity, and 'for people... to buy' is the correct infinitive structure.
× We have some big online markets where you can order whatever you want and any type of shoes
✓ We have some big online markets where you can order whatever you want, including any type of shoes
The original sentence lacks clarity. Adding 'including' improves the prepositional phrase and clarifies that any type of shoes can be ordered.
× Well, I guess nearly 5000 of rubles
✓ Well, I guess nearly 5000 rubles
The phrase '5000 of rubles' is incorrect. The correct form is '5000 rubles' without 'of' when expressing amounts of money.
× It's actually depends because umm, winter shoes usually require a higher price
✓ It actually depends because, umm, winter shoes usually require a higher price
The phrase 'It's actually depends' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It actually depends' without 'is' to agree with the subject.
× you of course need a comfortable shoes
✓ you of course need comfortable shoes
The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.
× then you will definitely need, uh, fashion one
✓ then you will definitely need, uh, a fashionable one
The word 'fashion' is a noun; the adjective form 'fashionable' is needed to describe 'one' (a shoe). Also, the article 'a' is required before 'fashionable one'.
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